Falling

picture this one day me on a wall the wind comes blows by watch me fall picture this rainy night wet street going home i trip mercy to my feet watch me fall picture this tall building and on the top is me i jump watch me fall picture this hospital room hospital bed nurse says should be dead but im not not yet picture this tuesday night checking vitals my pulse falters as i die you look and watch me fall

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Kaveesha Ruwindi

Date: 11/1/2023 7:30:00 AM

This was very entertaining to read! Please keep writing we would love to read more!

Beata Agustin

Date: 10/27/2023 1:44:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts on falling through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Karen Croft

Date: 10/24/2023 11:54:00 AM

I like the whole look of falling! Welcome to poetrysoup enjoy!