Karen Jones Poet Rhyme

Falling

When you kiss me I feel free
Wondering bird on the bluest breeze
Wonderfully made like orange fall leaf
Warm unafraid and amazed at my peace.

As you hold me I feel hope
Amber sun rays from holy ghost
Allowing me grace and the upmost
Anticipated love that keeps us close

Come near my dear never distress
Cry nor deny who loves you best
Christ is first then others digress
Can I be second in your happiness?

My love is agape my love is true
Moments are forever when I’m with you
Music is clever like our onyx union
Melodic together holy like communion. 

Joy is seeing your sweet smile
Juicy like fruit that I taste now
Jewel of my heart you are allowed
Jump in my thoughts and stay a while.

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The Situation September 25, 2023 at 6:07 PM The girl I have a picture of on my shelf. I seem to remember her writing of me. But nothing like this. Karen Jones September 25, 2023 at 6:48 PM I find that hard to believe as you are charming and funny. ;0)

Kim Rodrigues September 23, 2023 at 4:24 PM A wonderful mix of color, Spirit and joy! Love it! Karen Jones September 23, 2023 at 5:18 PM That you read one was great but this one too I am humbled!

Sotto Poet September 23, 2023 at 1:29 PM Karen, your words have truly captured the essence of this piece. I appreciate how you mention the 'highest form' of love, agape, as it adds depth and profoundness to your writing. Reading your words brings immense joy, as the love you have beautifully portrayed here is pure, tender, and almost ethereal in nature. Karen Jones September 23, 2023 at 1:32 PM Sotto Poet I am humbled by your words about this poem. Thanks dear.

Karen Jones September 23, 2023 at 12:36 PM Thanks Sam. I did not know this interesting fact about Einstein as it relates to relativity. Love is inspiring and even when it is absent it still reaches teaches allowing us how to become more. Have an awesome weekend. The Situation September 25, 2023 at 6:09 PM I think it's poetry by Einstein. Sam Scott September 25, 2023 at 1:56 AM “When a man sits with a pretty girl for an hour, it seems like a minute. But let him sit on a hot stove for a minute — and it's longer than any hour. That's relativity.” - Albert Einstein Sam Scott September 25, 2023 at 12:20 AM “When a man sits with a pretty girl for an hour, it seems like a minute. But let him sit on a hot stove for a minute — and it's longer than any hour. That's relativity.” - Albert Einstein

Sam Scott September 23, 2023 at 12:32 PM Can there every be too many love poems? I think not.. "Moments are forever when I’m with you" love bends time in an extraordinary way, even Einstein used it to explain his theory of relativity. All the feels captured here Karen. I like that you refer to the 'highest form' of love (agape) too. A happy read for me :) Karen Jones September 23, 2023 at 12:38 PM Oops I put my reply JUST above yours as a comment in error. Again thanks for reading and for teaching me as well.

Deb M September 23, 2023 at 8:56 AM Lovely poem Karen! Debx Karen Jones September 23, 2023 at 9:00 AM Thank you Deb!

Heidi Sands September 23, 2023 at 7:57 AM I love this rhyme. And the line, can I be your second happiness ? :) Karen Jones September 23, 2023 at 8:31 AM Thank you for reading Heidi

Valsa George September 23, 2023 at 6:01 AM "My love is agape"..... The love you have expressed here is asweet and divine. When God is placed first in life, our life and love will have a special flavor. Beautiful poem Karen ! Karen Jones September 23, 2023 at 7:09 AM That comment means so much coming from such a poetess. Thanks.

Evelyn Judy Buehler September 22, 2023 at 12:24 PM 'Amber sun rays from holy ghost' A well crafted, imagery rich work. It's a delight to read such a beautiful poem today, Karen. Karen Jones September 22, 2023 at 5:43 PM Thanks for reading and for your favorable comments Evelyn.

Sam Kauffman September 22, 2023 at 10:00 AM Karen, such a sweet and tender love poem with an amazing blend of images - "melodic together like holy communion," "my love is agape," "amber sun rays from holy ghost." You definitely have your priorities right for Christ must come first then everything else falls into place. Your poem is a lovely blessing! Thank you!! Sending you blessings of autumn joy. Karen Jones September 22, 2023 at 10:54 AM Thanks Sam for stopping by and leaving encouraging words

Ink Empress September 22, 2023 at 9:26 AM I love your rhymes and wordplay, Especially “ onyx union” “ jewel of my heart” such heartfelt lines throughout, very passionate and soulfully poetic. Great flow too: one of those poems that left me in awe Karen Jones September 22, 2023 at 10:52 AM I admire your work and appreciate your kind words.

The Situation September 21, 2023 at 7:41 PM Where are the church members that write like this!!! Karen Jones September 21, 2023 at 8:12 PM ?? Thanks for the laugh. I think the thoughts are there for many perhaps just not written. Lol

Joseph May September 21, 2023 at 4:42 PM Very creative and romantic write, best wishes Karen Jones September 21, 2023 at 4:52 PM Thanks for your kind words and for stopping by to read Joseph.

Bill Baker September 21, 2023 at 4:00 PM Engaging love poem to your truelove, Karen. I enjoyed reading your poetry ... this was my first visit, but I'll be back. A poet friend (to be) in Texas, Bill Karen Jones September 21, 2023 at 4:15 PM Hey there from North Carolina Bill. Thank you for reading my poem and I look forward to reading more of yours! Hugs