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Falling

it's falliing softly
to the kitchen floor, lands, rolls....
horrible fish oil

hairy, the male chihuahua
tried it once doesn't like it

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Delice Arleen Skelly

February 16, 2022 at 3:22 AM

Oooo, lovely so enjoyable...Delice

Kim Rodrigues

February 15, 2022 at 4:14 AM

LOL! Indeed funny…poor puppy

Sara Kendrick

February 15, 2022 at 7:45 AM

Kim, I am glad you got an LOL out of this one. Thanks for dropping by . I hope the laughter brought healing to anything that might ail you. Sara

Gershon Wolf

February 14, 2022 at 7:55 PM

Ha, ha, ha. This strikes me as a little fishy. Was that on porpoise, Sara?! HVD! :) Gershon

Sara Kendrick

February 15, 2022 at 3:08 AM

Gershon, I really like your comment. Your visit enlivened my morning. Sara

Alexis Y.

February 14, 2022 at 11:51 AM

Hi Sara, I enjoyed your poem very much. A dog let’s you know right a way what they don’t like. I don’t like fish oil either, my dad gave it to me when I was young. And the memory alone is “ Yuck! Happy Valentine’s Day- Alexis

Sara Kendrick

February 14, 2022 at 12:13 PM

Alexis, Thank you for the kind review of my work. I hope this has been the best Valentine's Day for you as well. My mother gave me Cod Liver Oil when I was a child. I don't know why. Most people don't like it. Sara

William Kelii Kekaula

February 12, 2022 at 2:02 AM

An entertaining anecdote, Sara, that you've penned articulately well here, giphy aside, my friend, Aloha~William!

Sara Kendrick

February 12, 2022 at 3:25 AM

Why, thank you, Hilo. I appreciate the nice review. Sara

Harry Horsman

February 11, 2022 at 5:57 AM

Its one way of learning, Sara. great tanka.

Sara Kendrick

February 11, 2022 at 2:00 PM

Your review of my work was uplifting. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

Sotto Poet

February 9, 2022 at 5:11 AM

Hello, Sara. Your Tanka was a pleasure to read. This made me laugh out loud. Chihuahuas are ready to try almost anything once, which makes sense. I enjoy this photo.

Sara Kendrick

February 11, 2022 at 1:59 PM

Lasaad, Yes, the Chihuahuas that I have owned are curious and lovable, but they don't eat the meds dropped on the floor. The male one is very aggressive and sometimes hard to get along with, but we have good moments. Your visit was delightful. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

February 8, 2022 at 4:24 PM

it's so funny when a dog tastes something and does not like it. I bet some crazy mutts out there actually like that nasty stuff.

Sara Kendrick

February 9, 2022 at 4:19 AM

Andrea, Our little male Chihuahua always smells of anything before he eats it. He determines if it is too hot, doesn't smell right or is medicine and he will not eat it if he decides against it. He is a very smart little dog. Very hard to get him to take his meds though. I can put cheese around it, peanut butter, or hotdog and if he decides it doesn't want it forget it. Thanks for stopping by. Sara

M. L. Kiser

February 8, 2022 at 1:41 PM

Haha, I'll bet he didn't, but they do love bubbles. So cute.

Sara Kendrick

February 8, 2022 at 1:42 PM

M.L., Thanks. I can feel the chuckle through the monitor. Sara

Debra L Brown

February 8, 2022 at 10:24 AM

Hi Sara, I enjoyed your poem. I had to laugh at this. My Chihuahua , when she finds anything on the floor, she will come and set it in front of you with the object in her mouth. The only way she will give to you, You'll have to give her a puppy bisque. If you try to take it, she will growl at you. She quite the little negotiator (LoL). Nice write Blessing ~ Debra

Sara Kendrick

February 8, 2022 at 1:31 PM

Thank you for such a lovely review of my work. I have enjoyed my Chihuahuas. The female who died back in late May was my love. The male of whom I was writing is not such a lovely little fellow, but he has his moments of love and appreciation. He is very aggressive and temperamental. I bet that little Chihuahua would bite if you pursued taking the object away from her like if you knew it would do her harm. Sara

Bill Baker

February 7, 2022 at 4:49 PM

Nice Tanka, Sara. Sounds right, Chihuahuas will try about anything once. lol Thanks for sharing, Bill

Sara Kendrick

February 8, 2022 at 1:23 PM

Bill, Thanks for the kind review. I am glad you got a chuckle. Sara

Darlene De Beaulieu

February 7, 2022 at 11:44 AM

Hello Sara Kendrick, I do not blame the Chichuahua one bit. So nice to meet you. Enjoy your day my friend.

Sara Kendrick

February 8, 2022 at 5:22 AM

Darlene, I don't take them. My husband is taking them. It doesn't bother him, I guess. Sara

Darlene De Beaulieu

February 7, 2022 at 4:15 PM

Hello Sara Kendrick, yes the taste is horrible. Why are you taking them? Enjoy your evening my friend.

Sara Kendrick

February 7, 2022 at 12:49 PM

Darlene, They are a horrible pill to take and the after effects are horrible. Thanks for your nice comments and enjoy your day. I hope this is a blessed one for you. Sara

Sara Kendrick

February 7, 2022 at 8:34 AM

I know the picture is not about the fish oil tablet but if he tries it and likes it, he will do it over and over like chasing his tail. Sara

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