Falling

such depth your prose knows love growing each rhyme scheming- lest I keep falling

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Line Gauthier

Date: 10/8/2022 12:28:00 PM

love it ~

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/2/2021 6:15:00 AM

'Such depth your prose knows' - already tells us how intense you mean this write to be - 'love growing, each rhyme scheming' - still more intense, and then you tell us that this is all intended for you, lest you keep falling. Deep meaning, soulful and touching, can another prevent ones intentions or may a rift be averted? Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/30/2021 8:39:00 PM

A joyous chasm, deeply moving. Thanks for sharing this beauty, Richard.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2021 5:45:00 PM

Love this!! I hope I am caught up on here now. I never remember where I left off at with people who commented to me!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/25/2021 6:34:00 PM

Always felt that love (and poetry) should be about growth upward i/o falling (downward) into... ~ gw

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/24/2021 11:29:00 AM

Fall into the beauty of poetry, and life will be all yours, :)

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/24/2021 5:22:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/23/2021 5:27:00 AM

Some poets have a way of drawing us into their poems and enticing us with their words. I appreciate the time spent at my page reading my lines. Sara