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Fallen For Your Charms

A beauty from afar has captured my eye Evoking so many feelings, deep inside Very mysterious, curvy and delicious I know I want to be, all she will need I followed her to a nightclub by the river I longed to know this star that shines so bright To my surprise, a star she was, provocative songs from her sultry voice A stranger and yet I felt so near This woman, this angel, all my desires I seek I leapt from my chair, no more silence, I must surely speak Captivated, on my knees, I kissed her hand Off with his wig, he said hello my name is Dan Notes: Tim Smith was kinda enough to allow me to use his great poem and take it in a completely different direction!!!!! Thanks Tim

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Date: 9/15/2014 10:31:00 PM
HAHAHAHA!
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Date: 9/8/2014 5:23:00 PM
excellent piece really beautifully penned
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/9/2014 7:48:00 PM
Thank you kindly Liam, a wee bit of Ireland was in me belly when I penned this one!
Date: 9/8/2014 8:13:00 AM
:D!!!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/9/2014 7:47:00 PM
:) :) :)
Date: 9/7/2014 7:32:00 AM
Hahahahaha that is hillarious Arthur! :)
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Date: 9/7/2014 6:42:00 AM
Hope you live happily ever after :).....love a happy ending... Lol
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/9/2014 7:47:00 PM
No happy endings for poets like me! :(
Date: 9/7/2014 4:03:00 AM
Ha ha ha - i wish it has been Stan - that's me in a poem I wrote with Darren Watson LOL great write I am sure Tim loves this! Hugs Jan xxx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/9/2014 7:46:00 PM
Thanks Jan, was a fun one for sure!
Date: 9/6/2014 11:53:00 PM
LOL enjoyed this poem made me smile...Seren
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/9/2014 7:45:00 PM
Thank you my friend :)

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