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Fallen Angel

She contemplates a crimson rose And mused on how she'd been consumed. How she fell, fell from grace When once just as this rose, she bloomed. One of the chosen ones, Her end, it came too soon. Her curiosity had led her here, To the waiting arms of doom. The dark side, it held her rapt It caught her in it's spell. She reached out just to touch it, But reached too far, and fell. Entry for Fallen Angel contest Sponsored by Laura Loo. 7/8/2017

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Date: 8/29/2017 3:33:00 PM
Congratulations Gary :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 8/29/2017 3:50:00 PM
Thank you Heidi :)
Date: 8/29/2017 5:01:00 AM
Hi Gary. Congrats for your placement with this wonderful piece!! ;-)
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Gary Smith
Date: 8/29/2017 5:37:00 AM
Thank you Teddy :)
Date: 8/27/2017 6:26:00 AM
Nicely captured, Gary! Congrats on your win! Regards, John.
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Gary Smith
Date: 8/27/2017 8:36:00 AM
Thank you John :)
Date: 8/25/2017 3:54:00 PM
Very nice - love this, Gary! Congrats on your win - keep up the great work! :-)
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Gary Smith
Date: 8/25/2017 4:02:00 PM
Thank you Greg :)
Date: 8/25/2017 6:44:00 AM
lovely rhythm and rhyme, great poem, thank you and congrats :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 8/25/2017 7:02:00 AM
Thank you Laura :)
Date: 8/18/2017 1:56:00 PM
Nicely-penned, Gary. I especially like the rose / angel comparison. Good luck with the contest! Regards, John.
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Gary Smith
Date: 8/18/2017 2:49:00 PM
Thank you John :)
Date: 8/14/2017 9:56:00 PM
Nicely done, My first poem was Fall From Grace :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 8/15/2017 5:02:00 AM
Thank you Debbie :)
Date: 8/10/2017 5:54:00 PM
Super cool Gary, that last line really got me. Good luck in the contest.
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Gary Smith
Date: 8/11/2017 3:32:00 AM
Thank you Phil :)
Date: 8/8/2017 1:56:00 PM
Wow. Great poem . You have done so well.
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Gary Smith
Date: 8/8/2017 2:18:00 PM
Thank you Derek :)
Date: 8/8/2017 6:19:00 AM
Sad, but beautifully penned. Good luck with the contest.
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Gary Smith
Date: 8/8/2017 8:28:00 AM
Thank you M.L. :)
Date: 8/7/2017 12:32:00 PM
Perfect write for the contest Gary! and a smooth read also. :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 8/7/2017 1:02:00 PM
Thank you Heidi :)

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