Fallen

How did it happen the years piling up like books stacked at crazy angles a veritable house o’ cards

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Bill Baker

Date: 4/3/2024 6:48:00 PM

I've been falling for the temptation of sweets, and it has to stop now. Cold turkey, cut off from chocolate April 1st. I've already made it 3 days ... almost. :-) Bill

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/3/2024 7:33:00 PM

Don't fall off the wagon now, my friend. Hang in there, man. Good luck! Will P. Auer

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/2/2024 4:57:00 AM

I have similar thoughts, Gershon...sometimes my life seems like a game of Jenga :-)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/2/2024 8:32:00 PM

O.K., so I looked at images of Jenga and and reminded of -- who else? -- the Cat in the Hat on the ball, when all the things he was balancing fall...

Michael Tor

Date: 4/2/2024 1:53:00 AM

It comes with age my friend...

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/2/2024 8:31:00 PM

And age for me has come with obesity, sadly... ~ gw