Fall Winds

Fall winds traveling Across the land are clumsy; What a mess they make. Scattering debris Everywhere they please and they, Never clean it up. Such carefree tempests Could at least be polite and Bring along a broom.

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Eve Roper

Date: 10/9/2018 10:41:00 PM

:) this is a very good string of Haiku, M.L. love the broom part <3

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/10/2018 7:58:00 AM

Oh, thanks so much, Eve; I'm glad you liked it.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 10/9/2018 8:25:00 AM

Nature speaks strong winds into your set of Haikus! And your poetic ink flows harmoniously with Autumn winds! Keep shining M.L. Kiser. My deepest regards. Be blessed always.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/9/2018 8:50:00 AM

Thank you so much, Besma; I am glad you liked it. Same...

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 10/8/2018 9:09:00 AM

And then the broom would have lost its bristles due to the winds...

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/9/2018 8:50:00 AM

Probably! Thanks.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/7/2018 9:27:00 AM

love the ending, yes. They could at least bring a broom!! Nice one.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/8/2018 7:15:00 AM

Thanks, so much.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 10/5/2018 3:27:00 AM

These are very nice, I will wait for the winter snow...

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/5/2018 3:30:00 AM

Thanks.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/4/2018 7:42:00 AM

This was us yesterday, a runner my husband had taped down with black electrical tape is half-way up, blowing in the wind this morning. I visualized a broom gliding by.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/4/2018 8:24:00 AM

Hee! Harry Potter wasn't riding that broom, was he? Thanks again.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/4/2018 6:47:00 AM

This is so so clever..had a good laugh..power of your imagination, M.L.K.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/4/2018 7:00:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay.

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/4/2018 6:44:00 AM

This is funny , as it happens just like this and I loved the humor at the end :)

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/4/2018 7:00:00 AM

Thanks again, Heidi.