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Fall Tonight

Trees wave goodbye To the leaves they once held Wind whistles tonight To those who are outside Autumn is visiting

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/4/2008 8:33:00 PM
Hello Sara.. thank you so much for your compliments on my poem Enchanted Garden.. it is relaxing.. isn't it... I love your tanka.. very well done... Constance
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Date: 10/4/2008 7:29:00 AM
Very nice write Sara. You certainly paint the picture in my mind with these well chosen words. blessings Michael
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Date: 10/3/2008 1:25:00 PM
Sara Wonderful write on Autumn great imagery ! Laura :)
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Date: 10/3/2008 10:20:00 AM
It produced a beautiful feeling. Lovely write. Love, Chitra
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Date: 10/3/2008 5:28:00 AM
Sara I think your right Autumn is here and in these parts it's looking like rain - God Bless
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Date: 10/3/2008 4:50:00 AM
very well expressed. I feel as if I AM actually witnessing autumn arriving right through your exquisite words. Keep rocking, Sara
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Date: 10/3/2008 4:11:00 AM
This Tanka captures the essence of Autumn with magnificence...Keep jotting down these thoughts :) Always, Farah
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