Premiere Contest WinnerFall Tiptoed In


Fall Tiptoed In 

Softly, last night it tiptoed in--
that wisp of crispness in the air!
I grab a quilt made way back when
and watch the sunrise from my chair.

The cinnamon breeze monarchs ride—
softly, last night it tiptoed in
and brought me thoughts of days gone by,
of marshmallows and campfire friends.

Can it be, summer’s at an end,
and fall has quietly begun?
Softly, last night it tiptoed in,
to avoid notice of the sun.

Just yesterday the summer heat 
made me wistful for fall, and then,
while I’m in bed and fast asleep,
softly, last night it tiptoed in!

8/26/2022
Hint of Autumn
Regina McIntosh, sponsor
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Agustin Avatar
May 28, 2026 at 3:42 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Fairchild Avatar
August 21, 2024 at 6:14 AM
I love the lilting rhythm of this one
Ball Avatar
October 31, 2023 at 11:17 PM
Lovely. I love Fall. All the colors and the crisp clan air. Nice job. God Bless, JB
Fairchild Avatar
July 31, 2023 at 7:47 AM
Another sweet, sad poem, P.S.! Good Heavens, how I love your work! Andrew
Awtry Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 10:48 AM
Thank you Andrew—-so good to see your avatar :) -ps
Rodrigues Avatar
February 8, 2023 at 9:03 PM
Very nice! Congratulations!
Awtry Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 10:47 AM
Ty Kim. <3
Peck Avatar
January 22, 2023 at 10:07 AM
Just beautiful!
Awtry Avatar
January 22, 2023 at 6:38 PM
Thank you so much Ann :)
Horsman Avatar
January 8, 2023 at 3:57 PM
Oh wow, so clever, oozes first place, and well deserved too. Harry
Awtry Avatar
January 8, 2023 at 5:14 PM
Thank you so much Harry! So good to see your avatar. I hope you are feeling better and better! God bless you, dear poet :) ~ps
Gauthier Avatar
January 2, 2023 at 7:28 AM
Lovely poem. Congrats on your well deserved win. Happy New Year to you and your loved ones ~
Awtry Avatar
January 2, 2023 at 9:40 AM
thank you Line! Wishing you all the best in the new year! ~ps
Rushing Avatar
October 3, 2022 at 2:40 PM
What a wonderful picture of Fall moving in.Congratulations on your much deserved trophy!
Awtry Avatar
October 3, 2022 at 10:37 PM
Thank you Wren! So good to hear from you. I hope all is well. -ps
Delaney Avatar
September 17, 2022 at 5:01 AM
What an Autumn gem of Autumn poems, PS……..it seems so true to the description that Autumn has just tiptoed in here this week. A wonderful trophy win. SuZ
Awtry Avatar
September 17, 2022 at 10:31 AM
Thank you so much Suzanne :) ps
M  Avatar
September 15, 2022 at 8:05 AM
Love this poem P.S it has such a gentleness to it…..Debx
Awtry Avatar
September 15, 2022 at 8:15 AM
Thank you very much Deb :) ps
Bueckert Avatar
September 5, 2022 at 6:31 PM
Beautiful write and spot on for the feeling outside right now! Congrats to you !
Awtry Avatar
September 6, 2022 at 3:41 AM
Thank you Hat :) ps
Romios Avatar
September 5, 2022 at 5:26 PM
Golly, PS, I commented four hours ago to Congratulate you on the trophy. Glad I came back. See! I told you it was outstanding as I was the first to comment. I also said it should be a POTD… I don’t like missing comments of mine. Love, Pangie xx
Awtry Avatar
September 5, 2022 at 6:02 PM
Thank you Pangie for all your encouragement :) ps
Alex Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 10:30 AM
You are, indeed, a great poet. I enjoyed your work. Share more, kindly. I want to read more from you. Teach me also how to write so technically like this. Congratulations!
Awtry Avatar
September 5, 2022 at 6:12 AM
Thank you for your very generous compliment. :) ps
Lamoureux Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 10:29 PM
Love this one. Congratulations on top placement.
Awtry Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 4:56 AM
Thank you Richard :) ps
George Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 6:45 PM
Your poem is so beautiful. Its sweetness has tip toed into me, without making any sound. Congraatulations on your well deserved trophy win dear friend P.S.
Awtry Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 7:15 PM
Thank you Valsa. I am so glad you liked it :) ps
Poet Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 6:10 PM
Your poetry is just beautiful. It envelops the user in that pattern from a very long time ago that you stated. Many congrats on winning first context place. And thanks for your comment on my page it’s so encouraging.
Awtry Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 6:22 PM
Thank you for your kind words. :) ps
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 5:04 PM
You chose a really wonderful first line to create your autumn poem P.S. which ends your poem beautifully. Congratulations on your well earned Trophy! Blessings xxoo
Awtry Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 5:15 PM
Thank you very much Connie. Always so nice to have your encouraging comments :) ps
Peck Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 10:14 AM
Your poem is just lovely. It wraps one in that long-ago quilt you mentioned. Congratulations on First! I'm faving.
Awtry Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 11:39 AM
Thank you Ann! And wow a fave? Thank you again! :) ps
Brul Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 9:48 AM
Breathtakingly beautiful! Congratulations on you Trophy win!
Awtry Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 11:39 AM
Thank you so much JCB :) ps
Johnson Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 5:34 AM
Congrats. Much enjoyed. Blessings.
Awtry Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 6:01 AM
Thank you Curtis :) ps
Calasibetta Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 4:27 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. Expressed a trip down memory lane supremely! Love the imagery and “The cinnamon breeze monarchs ride”- how perfect! :)Paulette
Awtry Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 6:01 AM
Thank you Paulette! So glad you liked it :) ps
Mcintosh Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 3:58 AM
Really love this, definitely a fave. God bless you and Congrats on 1st place in the contest. Love, Gina
Awtry Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 6:00 AM
Regina, thank you for sponsoring this contest. I am very honored to have placed. This is the first time that one of my poems has placed first in a premier contest so I am quite tickled with my trophy :) ps
Gauthier Avatar
August 31, 2022 at 1:40 PM
Beautiful poem ~
Awtry Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 1:30 PM
Thank you Line :) ps
Wolf Avatar
August 28, 2022 at 8:21 PM
I love trying to catch seasons a tip-toe. Just let 'em try to get past my butterfly net. Why, I've caught more butter than flies in my time... Seriously, a very pretty write, P.S. Lovely! :) gw
Wolf Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 9:11 PM
--As long as Fall doesn't tiptoe through my tulips!! ~ Tiny Tim
Awtry Avatar
August 28, 2022 at 8:35 PM
Thank you for the bit of humor and your kind compliment! May fall tiptoe in soon! :) ps
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