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The form is actually a SNOWBALL.

fall colored tapestry trees undress one leaf at a time east winds disperse the stress dancing moves of a pantomime seductively I must confess stirs my muse already drawn to rhyme while in the fall colored tapestry a pageantry the trees undress one leaf at a time AP: 3rd place 2020 Submitted on November 5, 2018 for contest NOVEMBER 2018 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST Originally posted on October 19, 2018

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Date: 11/11/2018 12:49:00 PM
congrats Line on your win-- I like the way you personify via metaphor my favorite season.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/11/2018 2:02:00 PM
Thanks, LJ. Most appreciated.
Date: 11/10/2018 10:35:00 AM
Hi Line, droppung by with my congratulations on a much deserved win in the contest. have a wonderful Saturday....Mike.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/10/2018 5:01:00 PM
Thank you so much, Mike. Most appreciated.
Date: 11/8/2018 5:55:00 PM
well done, nice win!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/8/2018 8:34:00 PM
Thank you so much, Timothy.
Date: 11/7/2018 5:52:00 PM
Love the momentum of this one, Line, (even if snow and I have never gotten along), and congrats on your win in the contest. Best wishes, Gershon
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/7/2018 7:21:00 PM
Thanks, Gershon, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 10/20/2018 10:32:00 PM
"The trees undress/ One leaf at a time" Love this so much!! ;) Beautifully penned poem and a lovely use of this form!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/7/2018 7:21:00 PM
Thank you so much, Rhona. Most appreciated.
Date: 10/20/2018 7:29:00 AM
This touches on the fringe of a personification poem, so sweetly done.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/20/2018 9:32:00 AM
Thanks, Caren, for your lovely visit and comment.

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