Line Gauthier Poet Rhyme

Notes About The Poem

The form is actually a SNOWBALL.

Fall Pantomime

fall
colored
tapestry

trees undress
one leaf at a time
east winds disperse the stress

dancing moves of a pantomime
seductively I must confess
stirs my muse already drawn to rhyme

while in the fall colored tapestry
a pageantry the trees undress
one leaf at a time



AP:  3rd place 2020

Submitted on November 5, 2018 for contest NOVEMBER 2018 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST

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L. J. Carber November 11, 2018 at 12:49 PM congrats Line on your win-- I like the way you personify via metaphor my favorite season. Line Gauthier November 11, 2018 at 2:02 PM Thanks, LJ. Most appreciated.

Vladislav Raven November 10, 2018 at 10:35 AM Hi Line, droppung by with my congratulations on a much deserved win in the contest. have a wonderful Saturday....Mike. Line Gauthier November 10, 2018 at 5:01 PM Thank you so much, Mike. Most appreciated.

Timothy Mcguire November 8, 2018 at 5:55 PM well done, nice win! Line Gauthier November 8, 2018 at 8:34 PM Thank you so much, Timothy.

Gershon Wolf November 7, 2018 at 5:52 PM Love the momentum of this one, Line, (even if snow and I have never gotten along), and congrats on your win in the contest. Best wishes, Gershon Line Gauthier November 7, 2018 at 7:21 PM Thanks, Gershon, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Rhona Mcferran October 20, 2018 at 10:32 PM "The trees undress/ One leaf at a time" Love this so much!! ;) Beautifully penned poem and a lovely use of this form! Line Gauthier November 7, 2018 at 7:21 PM Thank you so much, Rhona. Most appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger October 20, 2018 at 7:29 AM This touches on the fringe of a personification poem, so sweetly done. Line Gauthier October 20, 2018 at 9:32 AM Thanks, Caren, for your lovely visit and comment.