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Fall Pantomime

fall
colored
tapestry

trees undress
one leaf at a time
east winds disperse the stress

dancing moves of a pantomime
seductively I must confess
stirs my muse already drawn to rhyme

while in the fall colored tapestry
a pageantry the trees undress
one leaf at a time



AP:  3rd place 2020

Submitted on November 5, 2018 for contest NOVEMBER 2018 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST

Originally posted on October 19, 2018

Copyright © Line Gauthier | Year Posted 2018

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L. J. Carber Date: 11/11/2018 12:49:00 PM congrats Line on your win-- I like the way you personify via metaphor my favorite season. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 11/11/2018 2:02:00 PM Thanks, LJ. Most appreciated.

Vladislav Raven Date: 11/10/2018 10:35:00 AM Hi Line, droppung by with my congratulations on a much deserved win in the contest. have a wonderful Saturday....Mike. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 11/10/2018 5:01:00 PM Thank you so much, Mike. Most appreciated.

Timothy Mcguire Date: 11/8/2018 5:55:00 PM well done, nice win! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 11/8/2018 8:34:00 PM Thank you so much, Timothy.

Gershon Wolf Date: 11/7/2018 5:52:00 PM Love the momentum of this one, Line, (even if snow and I have never gotten along), and congrats on your win in the contest. Best wishes, Gershon Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 11/7/2018 7:21:00 PM Thanks, Gershon, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Rhona Mcferran Date: 10/20/2018 10:32:00 PM "The trees undress/ One leaf at a time" Love this so much!! ;) Beautifully penned poem and a lovely use of this form! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 11/7/2018 7:21:00 PM Thank you so much, Rhona. Most appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger Date: 10/20/2018 7:29:00 AM This touches on the fringe of a personification poem, so sweetly done. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 10/20/2018 9:32:00 AM Thanks, Caren, for your lovely visit and comment.