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Fall Of Autumn The deep south, confused summer, autumn's blight, Nature's microwave is on overdrive, Dog day noons, sultry dusk undress the night, Escapist schemes, routes north relief, connive. Red Indian drumbeats as Fall swelters, Mirage, sweaty heads host an oasis, Sane in A/C cars, dash in cool shelters, Heat holds life, pause Winters' death, the basis. Latter is solace, fire sparks energy, Pains of the past, remedies in their youth, Melts the built, curls their hair, sums synergy, Drab purple dawn the horizon, cold truth. Gasps of frost taunt the raw vexing season's, Soft made tough, green ripens, Fall sets reasons. 2019 October 05 *3rd Place* Autumn sonnet ~~John Hamilton

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Date: 10/8/2019 11:07:00 AM
I love, "Gasps of frost". That's beautiful. Congrats on your win.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 10/8/2019 12:32:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 10/6/2019 1:47:00 PM
Thanks William for your unique entry, congrats on your win!
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Hilo Poet
Date: 10/6/2019 1:51:00 PM
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Date: 10/5/2019 10:51:00 AM
You have surpassed your own poetry with this one William. So well done! Bravo!
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Date: 10/5/2019 11:19:00 AM
Humble--big time--as I the soloist plays to an orchestra of critiques, THANKS for the rise! ~ Aloha always William

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