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whoa! fire, fire everywhere! a bright fall noon blanketed by a vast sea of red leaves worker parts "Red Sea" with rake? who is that? sure ain't Moses! look, he's got... helpers, too. Double Tetractys 8 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Eve Roper Photo chosen: 4 Date written: 08/23/2021

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Date: 9/14/2021 11:30:00 AM
Lines full of creative whimsy and vivid word choices Edward! Fun poem! Congrats for your win. Blessings for you!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/14/2021 1:01:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sam:-) Most appreciated.
Date: 9/9/2021 6:18:00 PM
Edward, congratulations on your win. Your verse had great imagery and flow. Thank you so much for writing a verse for the contest. Hugs Eve
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/10/2021 4:13:00 AM
Thank you very much for the congrats and my placement, Eve:-)
Date: 8/23/2021 5:20:00 PM
I really like your description of this picture, Edward. Very creative approach. Best wishes in the contest.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/23/2021 5:22:00 PM
Thank you very much, Milt:-)

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