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Poetry/Rhyme/Fall is Coming - TSF
Copyright Protected, ID 08-1754-641-25
All Rights Reserved, 2025, Constance La France
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Written August 25, 2025/AI Free
For the International Contest, Two Seven Four
Sponsor, Charles Messina, Judged 09/13/2025

FIRST PLACE

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Fall is Coming - TSF

 

Days are
fading
leaves fall
orange
yellow
ruby
and red !

They fly
and twirl
swirl and
whirl then
they rest
then dance
wings spread !

The wind
is cool
the clouds
gather
and rain
kisses 
with love !

The air
grows cold
winter
is here
snowflakes
fall from
above !

autumnrhyme

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Terry Miller

Date: 9/14/2025 4:19:00 PM

This poem has such rhythm, I want to dance and whirl, and swirl, congratulations

Constance La France
Date: 9/15/2025 3:09:00 AM

Terry, thank you for the compliment and congratulations, blessings

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/14/2025 2:31:00 PM

Awesome! Congratulations

Constance La France
Date: 9/15/2025 3:10:00 AM

Andrea, thank you for the compliment and congratulations. Blessings

Charles Messina

Date: 9/13/2025 11:12:00 AM

Constance, this twirling, swirling, whirling wonderful seasonal poem is a pleasure to read. Congratulations on your top win!

Constance La France
Date: 9/15/2025 3:12:00 AM

Charlie, thank you for the contest and my placement and for the compliment and congratulations, blessings

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 9/13/2025 7:44:00 AM

Congratulations on a beautiful fall "two,seven,four". I anticipate those days when I drive about noticing the change in nearby woods and forests. Looking forward to winter and January which will bring me a new great grandchild. May God bless you, Constance.

Constance La France
Date: 9/15/2025 3:14:00 AM

Reason, thank you for the congratulations, comment, and congratulations, blessings