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Fall In First - Cinquain - Cinqku

two clasp white morning smoke — two who spoon bumps away from heat spinning out of the glass, bench space two spoons, sugar eyes, coffee mug tilt — lips touched by the moment, chairs screech

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Date: 6/13/2025 8:05:00 AM
- ... smells wonderful in the morning, Paige :) - hugs
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Date: 6/12/2025 7:35:00 PM
two spoons, sugar eyes, coffee mug tilt…Love it, Paige!
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Date: 6/12/2025 6:07:00 PM
Mmmmm...lips touched by the moment! Love your coffee poem, Paige. :)
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Date: 6/12/2025 3:33:00 PM
Sugar eyes. That was a sweet image
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Date: 6/11/2025 8:49:00 PM
Alas I am a tea drinker. Doctors prohibit coffee, much as I love it. Still love your cinquain.
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Date: 6/11/2025 7:05:00 PM
Great reading, Paige. I enjoyed the aroma of freshly brewed coffee in the morning.
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Date: 6/11/2025 6:18:00 PM
A Starbucks moment, or morn. Enjoyable read, Paige. I liked the smell of the white morning smoke~
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