Fall Drive On a Country Road

As I step outside, I feel a chill in the air. It's a perfect time for an afternoon drive. With the top down on this glorious day, I realize summer has reached its end. Leaves are strewn across vast meadows, tumbling aground in a profusion of vivid colors of russet, umber, and gold. It looks so festive! I don't know where this country road will take me, nor do I care, for the day is resplendently fair. Rustic beauty abounds in this autumnal scenery. Clearly, Mother Nature is calling upon fall to spread its wings and fly over hills and valleys as she orchestrates the changing of her seasons. I've just crossed a bridge where waters babble, sounding like a melody played by woodland nymphs. With the wind in my hair, and saffron sun shining, I'm in harmony with the rhythmic song of autumn. Feeling the need to act like an adventurous child, I stop on the roadside and climb an old wooden fence. An apple orchard tempts me to help myself, so, I'm biting into a juicy apple, savoring its flavor. From atop a lookout point on a mountain crest, a sultry autumn breeze is permeating the air with a heady scent of wild roses and clematis. Sadly, I turn from the cliff's view. Time to go home. A sanguine sun seems to be setting the world ablaze with flames as it silently slips into the sea. Soon, a harvest moon will ascend in her golden glory. What a wonderful day I've spent driving across the land. Tomorrow, I plan to bake a pan of cobbler because I can't forget the succulent flavor of that delicious apple. I'll take the same drive again in a few weeks to get two pumpkins from the patch several miles back. There'll be one for a jack-o-lantern with a frightful face and another for the filling of spiced pumpkin pies. September 11, 2022 Fall Flavors Contest ~ Sponsor: Gina McIntosh Chosen Theme ~ Taking a fall drive

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Date: 10/24/2022 11:18:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me vicariously feel how is it to "take a fall drive" with delight since I live in an "Autumnless" country. God bless you.
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Date: 10/24/2022 11:22:00 AM
What a beautiful, scenic picture of this magnificent season Jenna. I love the element of mystery in your poem. Congratulations on your win! Blessings for your autumn journey!
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Date: 10/24/2022 6:25:00 AM
Back with huge congratulations Jenna. This is still a lovely journey. :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/24/2022 7:49:00 AM
Thank you once again, Linda.
Date: 9/12/2022 7:19:00 AM
What a lovely journey so well-described with perfect imagery. Thanks for taking along! Linda
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/23/2022 6:43:00 AM
Thank you very much, Linda.
Date: 9/12/2022 4:33:00 AM
Lovely this ride you took us to Jenna. You express such great imagery in your words and make us want to be there...
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/12/2022 5:13:00 AM
Thanks so much, Michael.
Date: 9/11/2022 12:09:00 PM
An autumnal free verse to tantalise all the senses Jenna, and how the simple pleasures in life can be so fulfilling, and done at a nice leisurely pace, a carefree, perfect day, was a pleasure to read, as Milt said a hard one to top, all the best for contest, cheers David
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/12/2022 5:10:00 AM
Thank you, David.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 9/12/2022 3:32:00 AM
I like to comment on good poetry Jenna, bright, dark, dismal or stark!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/12/2022 1:56:00 AM
It's a drive I'd love to have really taken. Thank you for your many encouraging comments on my poetry, David. That means a lot to me.
Date: 9/11/2022 10:12:00 AM
Well, I can say, if this isn't a winner I don't know what could top it. Your imagery is so vivid I felt like I was riding shotgun. I liked the third stanza best, but all of them were right on. Best of luck, Jenna, in Gina's contest. Save me some apple cobbler!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/11/2022 10:44:00 AM
Thank you for being supportive, Milt. I’m pleased with it but we shall see. You’d always be welcome to sit at my table.
Date: 9/11/2022 8:27:00 AM
You take the reader on a wonderful journey Jenna, it's on my bucket list to see New England in the fall and to see the amazing colours, throw in the apple pie and I'm in heaven. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 9/11/2022 10:11:00 AM
I’m sure you wont be disappointed in that trip, Tom. Thanks!
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