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Fall - Three Haiku

FALL (three Haiku) frosted lawn black with sparrows pecking gust of cold wind blink of the eye last leaf flutters down snowy day fox and geese circle shrouded Dave Austin

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Matthew Anish

Date: 12/12/2011 2:19:00 PM

Fall has come to and end. You echo the season well in these short poems Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/16/2011 9:18:00 PM

Daver, i hope that one last leaf travels all the way to Texas... we sure can use, a hint of fall...It happens to be summer down here((LOL)) I don't think Texas, doesn't know the meaning of SEASON CHANGE... hehhe! Well glad i'm not the FOX... geese are scarier when they are cold.... all 3 are lovley...Take care,..p.d.

Date: 11/16/2011 11:45:00 AM

Interesting imagery makes for good reading. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us and for your kind comment. Karen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/15/2011 8:25:00 PM

daver, I saw these at my hotmail when you posted them at PFT but I bet you did not get my message I sent you. I REALLY like them. Especially the first two. the middle one best of all!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/15/2011 12:24:00 PM

Very lovely images of fall, Daver. Really enjoyed thinking of the snow-covered lawn "black with sparrows." The second verse reminded me of the brevity of life and the last one gave me a big smile. Very nicely done! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/15/2011 10:51:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your work..Very descriptive indeed..Sara