Fall

scarlet leaves litter the ground the branches sway in the breeze yellow leaves skitter away chased by the unseen 03/11/2012 Francine Roberts entered in Russell's "Natural Dodoitsu" contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/12/2013 9:05:00 PM

Just one, but one stunning one, and a well deserved win with it, Francine. Congratulations.

Skat A

Date: 1/12/2013 12:10:00 PM

Francine, Congratulations, a wonderful win*SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/11/2013 9:57:00 PM

Francine, .. I'm here to offer support In Russell's "Natural Dodoitsu ” contest.. :-) CONGRATULATIONS (-: good night~ PD

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/11/2013 12:06:00 AM

love it, love it...last line is great. congrats. BG

Seren Roberts

Date: 1/9/2013 9:58:00 PM

Well done Francine .....Seren

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/9/2013 8:16:00 PM

Congratulations on your brilliant little dodoitsu and your no. 1. Love, joyce

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/9/2013 4:32:00 PM

Ahhh!!Great flow..Congrats on your win..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/9/2013 2:39:00 PM

Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/9/2013 2:00:00 PM

Congratulations on your fantastic win, Francine! Love, Annalise

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/9/2013 1:02:00 PM

Congratulations Francine on your winning spot xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/7/2012 5:36:00 AM

This one is very descriptive of the fall season with its colorful beauty..Enjoyed reading it this morning..Thanks for reading and giving my work a place of honor in your contest..I appreciate you doing so..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/6/2012 7:15:00 AM

francine, it's ok now. I sent Soup lots of emails last night and when I came here this morning, i had back my membership area and this time I clicked on your contest and it said I had already entered it. I was thinking I hadn't because someone asked me where my entry for your contest was. Sometimes I forget to enter contests and I had gotten worried!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/5/2012 11:44:00 PM

I need to tell you also. I somehow had neglected to enter my poem for your contest, so I went to do it right now. You were up to 33 at this moment. well, I have lost my abilities on Soup. I have no member area to go to, no mail showing and when I try to enter a contest, my poems do not show up. I can't post a new poem either. Please will you reserve me a spot in your contest in case others are able to enter but I cannot? I really hope this problem is taken care of by tomorrow! sent word to soup.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/5/2012 11:41:00 PM

wow, this is really pretty. I need to visit your poetry more often, Francine.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/4/2012 6:49:00 AM

I just love seeing the leaves free and moving willy nilly everywhere good one Francine! Light & Love

Anne Rutherford

Date: 11/4/2012 4:43:00 AM

So appropriate for this time of the year Francine. With maples and a huge willow tree,I think it's me chasing them .Lol .Anne