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old leaves are falling sailing, reluctant, kiss death the fragile air breaks healing hearts are letting go love letters, clutched until now ? 2010

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Date: 11/20/2017 4:04:00 PM
Wonderful little piece Grace
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Date: 1/3/2016 6:51:00 PM
Deep
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Date: 2/10/2013 10:15:00 AM
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Date: 10/20/2010 7:26:00 PM
Grace, I did a little better with this one (grin). Charles --Very nice
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Date: 10/20/2010 6:58:00 PM
oh, no, are they going to throw their love letters away?? I could never do that! I love how you combined the letters with that melancholy feeling fall gives us. And the letting go. . . . thanks for the heads up on my typo. LUv, Andrea ps, my captcha says NUTS. hahaha.
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Date: 10/20/2010 3:36:00 PM
this is beautiful and sad. you have so much going on here in such a short verse. i especially like the last two lines.
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Date: 10/20/2010 6:37:00 AM
Summer love fading with the autumn leaves. Beautiful tanka, Grace! Nice to see you posting again. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/20/2010 5:04:00 AM
Very romantic farewell to the autumn - letting go love letters - nice image, Grace
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