Fall

old leaves are falling sailing, reluctant, kiss death the fragile air breaks healing hearts are letting go love letters, clutched until now ? 2010

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Bic Gi-Sa

Date: 11/20/2017 4:04:00 PM

Wonderful little piece Grace

Skat A

Date: 1/3/2016 6:51:00 PM

Deep

... Gigno

Date: 2/10/2013 10:15:00 AM

!!!

Charles Henderson

Date: 10/20/2010 7:26:00 PM

Grace, I did a little better with this one (grin). Charles --Very nice

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/20/2010 6:58:00 PM

oh, no, are they going to throw their love letters away?? I could never do that! I love how you combined the letters with that melancholy feeling fall gives us. And the letting go. . . . thanks for the heads up on my typo. LUv, Andrea ps, my captcha says NUTS. hahaha.

Jancarl Campi

Date: 10/20/2010 3:36:00 PM

this is beautiful and sad. you have so much going on here in such a short verse. i especially like the last two lines.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/20/2010 6:37:00 AM

Summer love fading with the autumn leaves. Beautiful tanka, Grace! Nice to see you posting again. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/20/2010 5:04:00 AM

Very romantic farewell to the autumn - letting go love letters - nice image, Grace