Fall

old leaves are falling
sailing, reluctant, kiss death
the fragile air breaks 
healing hearts are letting go
love letters, clutched until now


? 2010

lost loverecovery from...romancetanka

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Bic Gi-Sa

November 20, 2017 at 4:04 PM

Wonderful little piece Grace

Skat A

January 3, 2016 at 6:51 PM

Deep

... Gigno

February 10, 2013 at 10:15 AM

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Charles Henderson

October 20, 2010 at 7:26 PM

Grace, I did a little better with this one (grin). Charles --Very nice

Andrea Dietrich

October 20, 2010 at 6:58 PM

oh, no, are they going to throw their love letters away?? I could never do that! I love how you combined the letters with that melancholy feeling fall gives us. And the letting go. . . . thanks for the heads up on my typo. LUv, Andrea ps, my captcha says NUTS. hahaha.