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geese fly south seeking warmer climes leaves carpet the ground Bite Size Poem no.20 Poetry Contest sponsored by Line Gauthier 09/05/21

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Pratap Roy

Date: 9/18/2021 3:39:00 AM

Nicely captured the scene.Loved it. All the best for the contest.God bless you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/7/2021 11:34:00 AM

- Lovely haiku, Jan :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 9/7/2021 11:21:00 AM

A lovely portrait of nature Jan! Goof Luck!!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/7/2021 7:45:00 AM

Very nice!

Judy Ball

Date: 9/7/2021 6:26:00 AM

Lovely Haiku Jan. You bring Fall to the front in this well expressed piece. Love the pic. God Bless, JB

Susan Lawrence

Date: 9/6/2021 1:24:00 PM

Yes...I see and feel it now. Just lovely Jan ! Hugs, Susan :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/6/2021 11:05:00 AM

Oh I so love the image you portray, I am so ready for fall, Jan, :)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/7/2021 11:23:00 AM

its turning autumnal now Vie:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/6/2021 7:13:00 AM

Hi Jan, In a few words you painted a lovely picture with words. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 9/6/2021 9:19:00 AM

thanks Alexis i love this time of year and it always inspires poems:-) hugs Jan xx

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 9/6/2021 3:15:00 AM

Nicely done Jan, I am patiently waiting to feel that edge in the air signifying autumn....Delice

Jan Allison
Date: 9/6/2021 4:36:00 AM

the trees are already starting to lose their leaves, autumn is definitely in the air here, hugs Jan xx

Francesca Pappadogiannis

Date: 9/6/2021 2:37:00 AM

What a beautiful image:)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/6/2021 4:30:00 AM

thanks Francesca:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/5/2021 4:26:00 PM

Perfect autumnal image Jan. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 9/6/2021 4:29:00 AM

Thanks Tom inspired by geese i saw flying in their beautiful V formation:-) hugs jan xx