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FALL autumn falling leaves searching for a way and hope was fading fast yet fortune smiled upon me somber moods color autumn days
7-22-2020

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Date: 9/8/2020 5:41:00 PM
oh this must be the pyramid form?? Gotta look into this one. WELL DONE!!
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Date: 9/7/2020 7:46:00 PM
Enjoyed great example.
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Date: 7/28/2020 12:40:00 PM
Autumn is my favorite season, the colors of brown, orange dark red, scarlet are so becoming, almost intoxicating, beautiful to see. Well penned my friend. Go to soup please Joseph. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/26/2020 7:35:00 PM
I love the imagery of Autumn. Leaves of many beautiful colors softly falling to the ground. I want to be in this moment. Your words take me there. My heart is smiling. :) Brandy
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Date: 7/26/2020 6:52:00 PM
Autumn is so beautiful, Joseph. and so is this poetry.
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Date: 7/25/2020 1:27:00 PM
Somber moods that will be sad the sun will be gone...Well expressed
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Date: 7/24/2020 11:11:00 PM
Nice little poem, Joseph:)
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Date: 7/24/2020 3:27:00 PM
This is a very nice read, Joseph. I notice the pattern "falls" gently like fall itself!
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Date: 7/24/2020 11:39:00 AM
Soothing...easy on the eyes and soul...Well done
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Date: 7/23/2020 4:49:00 AM
Autumn brings the blend of somber weather enriched by the colors of nature. Succinctly depicted, Joseph.
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