Faking Feelings

Faking feelings is what you do best, undermining hope with false feelings. And deceived by lust's many guises, increased your vulnerability. Fantasy divides reality into darkening shades of despair. And feeling all alone, you struggle, believing that no one even cares. Anger fuels your disappointment, while jealousy extorts love's absence. And truth provides little protection from the bittersweet lies that flatter. Sadness deflates inflated egos, allowing time for thoughts to gestate. Happiness cannot be chained to tears; Love requires trust to make it real. Spent on a splurge of self-deception; Hope is the last treasure you deplete. While frustration is a side effect of dreams scuttled on the rocks of doubt. Loneliness lies heavy on your heart, but a smile masks the pain you're feeling. And yet plastic smiles, like cheap jewels, have no value, but to veil your tears.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/25/2018 8:18:00 PM
Love this line "And smiles are displayed like cheap jewels"
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Date: 3/7/2015 7:21:00 PM
a more mature exploration of this theme emile, i like it a lot
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/8/2015 10:06:00 AM
Thanks again Steven, your visits are most welcomed. Emile.
Date: 1/24/2015 6:47:00 AM
Emile, your poem is very powerful and full of wonderful words, the masks of life protect us from being hurt, well done and thanks for visiting my poem The Rain Came, one thing I have in abundance is imagination, as you are finding out and I think you are becoming my number one supporter, thank you
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Date: 1/24/2015 6:59:00 AM
We will continue to discover and support each other's talents as we open our thoughts for the others perusal. Emile.
Date: 1/23/2015 12:04:00 PM
7 thumbs up, This one pretty much sums up what my previous relationship was like. Glad that fake ride came ro an end. Excellent piece here.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/23/2015 12:10:00 PM
Thanks for the 7 thumbs up, I appreciate your support. Emile. Disregard that other reply the program messed up somehow.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/23/2015 12:05:00 PM
Thanks Cherl, I bask in the glow of your praise. Emile.
Date: 1/23/2015 10:23:00 AM
This a seven my friend Emile great lines, love the line For love cannot survive chained to tears, it requires freedom to make it real, wow you have a lot to bring here to the soup welcome I look forward to read more poems from you in the future, cheri and thanks for your comment and seven also
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Date: 1/23/2015 12:57:00 PM
Thanks Cherl, I bask in the glow of your praise. Emile.
Date: 1/23/2015 9:42:00 AM
very well depicted Emile much feeling went into this write hugs soup-mail 7
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Date: 1/23/2015 10:05:00 AM
Thanks Shadow, you input is welcomed. Emile.
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