Faith Fulfilled

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Real Answers about Heaven | Ray Fowler .org

To lay my life and labor on God’s loving Light
      Precious purpose possessed  with prayers  granted,
      As  humble acceptance abides  within...always.

His Loyalty lifts  night’s loneliness,     Oh I let go--
      Of grievances --   ever  grateful for guidance’s fill,
       Freeing the self from fear, my faith aflame:

Praise be this promise assured by Peace  awakened. Amen


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Isaiah 43: 2
When you pass through the waters,
I will be with you; and when you go
 through the rivers, they will not overwhelm you.

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Alliteration Regarding Relationship with God Contest
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Beata Agustin

Date: 9/29/2020 9:24:00 PM

Congrats! It's a blessing to read your poetic expression of your relationship with God. So delighted am I with your first line: "To lay my life and labor on God’s loving Light" as well as your concluding line: "Praise be this promise assured by Peace awakened. Amen." God bless you, kaibigang makata!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/29/2020 11:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Beautiful and very inspirational. Thanks for adding Isaiah 43: 2 at the bottom. So very true. Enjoy your win.................