Fairytale In My Heart

Into the deep woods cheerfully I walked
Following the path of a lone shining star
Hosting a magical fairytale in my heart
Beholding sweet visions of who you are.

Sights and sounds symbolized the dark
Resonating nocturnal bird's wailing call
Alarmed by the whining of porcupines
Breaking silence of a formative night fall.

Gentle winds blew carrying ardent vibes
As your beautiful sight graced my eyes
Being a regal princess in heavenly attire
Delighting the province of moonlit skies.

Flashing mythic smile in lyrical vocabulary
Attuned to the cadence of musical strings
You whispered to voices of sensual wishes 
Arousing passions seductive dream brings.

As you then kissed me I became a prince
Adding a new chapter to ancient allegory
Until the bird songs rudely awakened me
Alerting you to vanish before end my story.

January 8, 2019
Poem of the day on January 10, 2019
Placed first in February 2019 week 1 contest by Brian Strand 
Placed 2nd in Into the woods poetry contest by Silent One

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 1/25/2022 5:13:00 AM
Is it a fairy tale or just a figment of imagination? Whatever it be, it has the bewitching beauty of a sensational romantic tale ! You make even a reverie, a golden experience with your Mida's touch !
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Date: 1/19/2019 11:25:00 AM
Back with a big congratulations on your win, :). Hugs Eve ~`*
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/8/2019 7:06:00 AM
Thank you Eve.
Date: 1/18/2019 7:26:00 AM
Nicely written!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/8/2019 7:06:00 AM
Thank you Valerie.
Date: 1/15/2019 8:25:00 AM
Congratulations Vijay, I have been moving but hope to have more time now Well done !!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/16/2019 9:14:00 AM
Thank you Mike.
Date: 1/14/2019 3:10:00 PM
Congratulations to you, Vijay.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/16/2019 9:14:00 AM
Thank you Andrea.
Date: 1/13/2019 6:18:00 PM
Congratulations Vijay, on this win. Your words truly shine. :) Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/14/2019 8:09:00 AM
Thank you Brandy.
Date: 1/13/2019 2:00:00 PM
There's a magical unfolding in this poem; beautifully penned. Congratulations on the poem.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/14/2019 8:09:00 AM
Thank you MLK.
Date: 1/13/2019 12:22:00 PM
double treat for you, vijay.. a POTD and fine award in SO's contest... you are on a roll!...congrats and huggs!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/14/2019 8:08:00 AM
Thank you Nette.
Date: 1/13/2019 9:04:00 AM
Congrats on your win Vijay..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/14/2019 8:08:00 AM
Thank you Joseph.
Date: 1/13/2019 7:58:00 AM
Hi Vijay, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your fine win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/14/2019 8:08:00 AM
Thank you Alexis.
Date: 1/13/2019 7:34:00 AM
Great storytelling with great flow, and a romantic take, but disappointing end to it... Congrats on your placement in the contest.. Congrats on POTD also..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/14/2019 8:08:00 AM
Thank you SO.
Date: 1/12/2019 8:20:00 PM
You tell a pretty tale Sire, well done Vij,
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Date: 1/14/2019 8:07:00 AM
Thank you Pixie.
Date: 1/12/2019 7:58:00 PM
POTD. AWESOME, Vijay. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/14/2019 8:07:00 AM
Thank you Andrea.
Date: 1/12/2019 7:13:00 PM
This is AWESOME, Vijay! Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/14/2019 8:07:00 AM
Thank you Janice.
Date: 1/12/2019 10:55:00 AM
Very beautiful and enchanting poem, congrats on POTD!!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/14/2019 8:06:00 AM
Thank you Arthur.
Date: 1/11/2019 3:00:00 PM
An imaginative romantic beauty, Vijay. Congratulations on p.o.t.d. award. Regards // paul
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Date: 1/12/2019 7:42:00 AM
Thank you Paul for your visit and kind remarks. Regards.
Date: 1/10/2019 6:14:00 PM
Hi Vijay, dropping by with my congratulations on your much deserved Poem Of the Day honour with this wonderful poetic gem. If I were able to fave it again, I would. Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/11/2019 7:18:00 AM
Thank you for the return visit..appreciate, as always.
Date: 1/10/2019 5:39:00 PM
Beautifully penned Vijay, congratulations on POTD! Good luck in the contest!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/11/2019 7:17:00 AM
Thank you Wren..appreciate the visit and your comments.
Date: 1/10/2019 3:34:00 PM
Great write with super imagery, Congrats on the POTD!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/10/2019 4:51:00 PM
Thank you Gordon for your visit and kind remarks.
Date: 1/10/2019 12:55:00 PM
Vijay, I am so happy to see this poem being honored with POTD! You know it went straight into my faves. Congratulations my friend! : ) xxoo
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/10/2019 4:50:00 PM
Thank you Connie for your supportive comments..yes--I remember the FAVE..much appreciated.
Date: 1/10/2019 10:52:00 AM
another POTD on your trophy wall, vijay!... congrats!..huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/10/2019 11:10:00 AM
Thank you for the return visit my friend..appreciate your kind remarks, as always.
Date: 1/10/2019 10:49:00 AM
So deserving as any of your poems would be. Congratulations!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/10/2019 11:08:00 AM
So kind of you to say that, SW. Appreciate your visit..many many thanks.
Date: 1/10/2019 10:46:00 AM
Your poem is impassioned with dreamy beauty that captures my imagination in such a wonderful way, Vijay, full of enchantment that lasts beyond the harsh reality of a rude awakening. Congratulations on your wonderful and well-deserved recognition with POTD honors, my friend.. ~Susan
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/10/2019 11:07:00 AM
I am always happy to read your cheerful feedback. Thank you for your support Susan. Appreciate your visit, my friend.
Date: 1/10/2019 9:10:00 AM
WoW! Vijay, You have penned such a romantic fairy tale write. I enjoyed it from start to finish. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/10/2019 11:06:00 AM
Thank you the very generous comments. Appreciate your visit, Alexis.
Date: 1/10/2019 8:55:00 AM
Vijay, so beautiful and dreamy. Congratulation on POTD.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/10/2019 11:05:00 AM
Thank your for the kind remarks..appreciate your visit Dear Heart.
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