Vijay Pandit Poet Rhyme

Fairytale In My Heart

Into the deep woods cheerfully I walked
Following the path of a lone shining star
Hosting a magical fairytale in my heart
Beholding sweet visions of who you are.

Sights and sounds symbolized the dark
Resonating nocturnal bird's wailing call
Alarmed by the whining of porcupines
Breaking silence of a formative night fall.

Gentle winds blew carrying ardent vibes
As your beautiful sight graced my eyes
Being a regal princess in heavenly attire
Delighting the province of moonlit skies.

Flashing mythic smile in lyrical vocabulary
Attuned to the cadence of musical strings
You whispered to voices of sensual wishes 
Arousing passions seductive dream brings.

As you then kissed me I became a prince
Adding a new chapter to ancient allegory
Until the bird songs rudely awakened me
Alerting you to vanish before end my story.

January 8, 2019
Poem of the day on January 10, 2019
Placed first in February 2019 week 1 contest by Brian Strand 
Placed 2nd in Into the woods poetry contest by Silent One

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Valsa George January 25, 2022 at 5:13 AM Is it a fairy tale or just a figment of imagination? Whatever it be, it has the bewitching beauty of a sensational romantic tale ! You make even a reverie, a golden experience with your Mida's touch !

Eve Roper January 19, 2019 at 11:25 AM Back with a big congratulations on your win, :). Hugs Eve ~`* Vijay Pandit February 8, 2019 at 7:06 AM Thank you Eve.

Valerie Staton January 18, 2019 at 7:26 AM Nicely written! Vijay Pandit February 8, 2019 at 7:06 AM Thank you Valerie.

Mike Gentile January 15, 2019 at 8:25 AM Congratulations Vijay, I have been moving but hope to have more time now Well done !!! Vijay Pandit January 16, 2019 at 9:14 AM Thank you Mike.

Andrea Dietrich January 14, 2019 at 3:10 PM Congratulations to you, Vijay. Vijay Pandit January 16, 2019 at 9:14 AM Thank you Andrea.

Brandy Nicole January 13, 2019 at 6:18 PM Congratulations Vijay, on this win. Your words truly shine. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit January 14, 2019 at 8:09 AM Thank you Brandy.

M. L. Kiser January 13, 2019 at 2:00 PM There's a magical unfolding in this poem; beautifully penned. Congratulations on the poem. Vijay Pandit January 14, 2019 at 8:09 AM Thank you MLK.

Nette Onclaud January 13, 2019 at 12:22 PM double treat for you, vijay.. a POTD and fine award in SO's contest... you are on a roll!...congrats and huggs! Vijay Pandit January 14, 2019 at 8:08 AM Thank you Nette.

Joseph May January 13, 2019 at 9:04 AM Congrats on your win Vijay.. Vijay Pandit January 14, 2019 at 8:08 AM Thank you Joseph.

Alexis Y. January 13, 2019 at 7:58 AM Hi Vijay, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your fine win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis Vijay Pandit January 14, 2019 at 8:08 AM Thank you Alexis.

Silent One January 13, 2019 at 7:34 AM Great storytelling with great flow, and a romantic take, but disappointing end to it... Congrats on your placement in the contest.. Congrats on POTD also.. Vijay Pandit January 14, 2019 at 8:08 AM Thank you SO.

Mystic Rose Rose January 12, 2019 at 8:20 PM You tell a pretty tale Sire, well done Vij, Vijay Pandit January 14, 2019 at 8:07 AM Thank you Pixie.

Andrea Dietrich January 12, 2019 at 7:58 PM POTD. AWESOME, Vijay. Congratulations! Vijay Pandit January 14, 2019 at 8:07 AM Thank you Andrea.

Janice Canerdy January 12, 2019 at 7:13 PM This is AWESOME, Vijay! Janice Vijay Pandit January 14, 2019 at 8:07 AM Thank you Janice.

Arthur Vaso January 12, 2019 at 10:55 AM Very beautiful and enchanting poem, congrats on POTD!!! Vijay Pandit January 14, 2019 at 8:06 AM Thank you Arthur.

Paul Callus January 11, 2019 at 3:00 PM An imaginative romantic beauty, Vijay. Congratulations on p.o.t.d. award. Regards // paul Vijay Pandit January 12, 2019 at 7:42 AM Thank you Paul for your visit and kind remarks. Regards.

Vladislav Raven January 10, 2019 at 6:14 PM Hi Vijay, dropping by with my congratulations on your much deserved Poem Of the Day honour with this wonderful poetic gem. If I were able to fave it again, I would. Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend always....Mike. Vijay Pandit January 11, 2019 at 7:18 AM Thank you for the return visit..appreciate, as always.

Wren Rushing January 10, 2019 at 5:39 PM Beautifully penned Vijay, congratulations on POTD! Good luck in the contest! Vijay Pandit January 11, 2019 at 7:17 AM Thank you Wren..appreciate the visit and your comments.

Gordon Mcconnell January 10, 2019 at 3:34 PM Great write with super imagery, Congrats on the POTD! Vijay Pandit January 10, 2019 at 4:51 PM Thank you Gordon for your visit and kind remarks.

Connie Marcum Wong January 10, 2019 at 12:55 PM Vijay, I am so happy to see this poem being honored with POTD! You know it went straight into my faves. Congratulations my friend! : ) xxoo Vijay Pandit January 10, 2019 at 4:50 PM Thank you Connie for your supportive comments..yes--I remember the FAVE..much appreciated.

Nette Onclaud January 10, 2019 at 10:52 AM another POTD on your trophy wall, vijay!... congrats!..huggs Vijay Pandit January 10, 2019 at 11:10 AM Thank you for the return visit my friend..appreciate your kind remarks, as always.

Sunlite Wanter January 10, 2019 at 10:49 AM So deserving as any of your poems would be. Congratulations! Vijay Pandit January 10, 2019 at 11:08 AM So kind of you to say that, SW. Appreciate your visit..many many thanks.

Susan Ashley January 10, 2019 at 10:46 AM Your poem is impassioned with dreamy beauty that captures my imagination in such a wonderful way, Vijay, full of enchantment that lasts beyond the harsh reality of a rude awakening. Congratulations on your wonderful and well-deserved recognition with POTD honors, my friend.. ~Susan Vijay Pandit January 10, 2019 at 11:07 AM I am always happy to read your cheerful feedback. Thank you for your support Susan. Appreciate your visit, my friend.

Alexis Y. January 10, 2019 at 9:10 AM WoW! Vijay, You have penned such a romantic fairy tale write. I enjoyed it from start to finish. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved:-) Alexis Vijay Pandit January 10, 2019 at 11:06 AM Thank you the very generous comments. Appreciate your visit, Alexis.

Constance La France January 10, 2019 at 8:55 AM Vijay, so beautiful and dreamy. Congratulation on POTD. Vijay Pandit January 10, 2019 at 11:05 AM Thank your for the kind remarks..appreciate your visit Dear Heart.

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