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Fairytale In My Heart

Into the deep woods cheerfully I walked Following the path of a lone shining star Hosting a magical fairytale in my heart Beholding sweet visions of who you are. Sights and sounds symbolized the dark Resonating nocturnal bird's wailing call Alarmed by the whining of porcupines Breaking silence of a formative night fall. Gentle winds blew carrying ardent vibes As your beautiful sight graced my eyes Being a regal princess in heavenly attire Delighting the province of moonlit skies. Flashing mythic smile in lyrical vocabulary Attuned to the cadence of musical strings You whispered to voices of sensual wishes Arousing passions seductive dream brings. As you then kissed me I became a prince Adding a new chapter to ancient allegory Until the bird songs rudely awakened me Alerting you to vanish before end my story. January 8, 2019 Poem of the day on January 10, 2019 Placed first in February 2019 week 1 contest by Brian Strand Placed 2nd in Into the woods poetry contest by Silent One

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Valsa George

Date: 1/25/2022 5:13:00 AM

Is it a fairy tale or just a figment of imagination? Whatever it be, it has the bewitching beauty of a sensational romantic tale ! You make even a reverie, a golden experience with your Mida's touch !

Eve Roper

Date: 1/19/2019 11:25:00 AM

Back with a big congratulations on your win, :). Hugs Eve ~`*

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/8/2019 7:06:00 AM

Thank you Eve.

Valerie Staton

Date: 1/18/2019 7:26:00 AM

Nicely written!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/8/2019 7:06:00 AM

Thank you Valerie.

Mike Gentile

Date: 1/15/2019 8:25:00 AM

Congratulations Vijay, I have been moving but hope to have more time now Well done !!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/16/2019 9:14:00 AM

Thank you Mike.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/14/2019 3:10:00 PM

Congratulations to you, Vijay.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/16/2019 9:14:00 AM

Thank you Andrea.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/13/2019 6:18:00 PM

Congratulations Vijay, on this win. Your words truly shine. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/14/2019 8:09:00 AM

Thank you Brandy.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/13/2019 2:00:00 PM

There's a magical unfolding in this poem; beautifully penned. Congratulations on the poem.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/14/2019 8:09:00 AM

Thank you MLK.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/13/2019 12:22:00 PM

double treat for you, vijay.. a POTD and fine award in SO's contest... you are on a roll!...congrats and huggs!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/14/2019 8:08:00 AM

Thank you Nette.

Joseph May

Date: 1/13/2019 9:04:00 AM

Congrats on your win Vijay..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/14/2019 8:08:00 AM

Thank you Joseph.

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/13/2019 7:58:00 AM

Hi Vijay, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your fine win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/14/2019 8:08:00 AM

Thank you Alexis.

Silent One

Date: 1/13/2019 7:34:00 AM

Great storytelling with great flow, and a romantic take, but disappointing end to it... Congrats on your placement in the contest.. Congrats on POTD also..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/14/2019 8:08:00 AM

Thank you SO.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/12/2019 8:20:00 PM

You tell a pretty tale Sire, well done Vij,

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/14/2019 8:07:00 AM

Thank you Pixie.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/12/2019 7:58:00 PM

POTD. AWESOME, Vijay. Congratulations!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/14/2019 8:07:00 AM

Thank you Andrea.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 1/12/2019 7:13:00 PM

This is AWESOME, Vijay! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/14/2019 8:07:00 AM

Thank you Janice.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/12/2019 10:55:00 AM

Very beautiful and enchanting poem, congrats on POTD!!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/14/2019 8:06:00 AM

Thank you Arthur.

Paul Callus

Date: 1/11/2019 3:00:00 PM

An imaginative romantic beauty, Vijay. Congratulations on p.o.t.d. award. Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/12/2019 7:42:00 AM

Thank you Paul for your visit and kind remarks. Regards.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/10/2019 6:14:00 PM

Hi Vijay, dropping by with my congratulations on your much deserved Poem Of the Day honour with this wonderful poetic gem. If I were able to fave it again, I would. Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend always....Mike.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/11/2019 7:18:00 AM

Thank you for the return visit..appreciate, as always.

Wren Rushing

Date: 1/10/2019 5:39:00 PM

Beautifully penned Vijay, congratulations on POTD! Good luck in the contest!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/11/2019 7:17:00 AM

Thank you Wren..appreciate the visit and your comments.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 1/10/2019 3:34:00 PM

Great write with super imagery, Congrats on the POTD!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/10/2019 4:51:00 PM

Thank you Gordon for your visit and kind remarks.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/10/2019 12:55:00 PM

Vijay, I am so happy to see this poem being honored with POTD! You know it went straight into my faves. Congratulations my friend! : ) xxoo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/10/2019 4:50:00 PM

Thank you Connie for your supportive comments..yes--I remember the FAVE..much appreciated.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/10/2019 10:52:00 AM

another POTD on your trophy wall, vijay!... congrats!..huggs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/10/2019 11:10:00 AM

Thank you for the return visit my friend..appreciate your kind remarks, as always.

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 1/10/2019 10:49:00 AM

So deserving as any of your poems would be. Congratulations!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/10/2019 11:08:00 AM

So kind of you to say that, SW. Appreciate your visit..many many thanks.

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/10/2019 10:46:00 AM

Your poem is impassioned with dreamy beauty that captures my imagination in such a wonderful way, Vijay, full of enchantment that lasts beyond the harsh reality of a rude awakening. Congratulations on your wonderful and well-deserved recognition with POTD honors, my friend.. ~Susan

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/10/2019 11:07:00 AM

I am always happy to read your cheerful feedback. Thank you for your support Susan. Appreciate your visit, my friend.

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/10/2019 9:10:00 AM

WoW! Vijay, You have penned such a romantic fairy tale write. I enjoyed it from start to finish. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/10/2019 11:06:00 AM

Thank you the very generous comments. Appreciate your visit, Alexis.

Constance La France

Date: 1/10/2019 8:55:00 AM

Vijay, so beautiful and dreamy. Congratulation on POTD.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/10/2019 11:05:00 AM

Thank your for the kind remarks..appreciate your visit Dear Heart.