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Fairy Tales

On peeping through the aperture inside the old oak tree I gasped with wonder to behold the vision that awaited me For deep inside three fairies slept their delicate wings like lace To attest their actuality a childhood dream I would embrace When I was young, a wee small child, sometimes naughty, sometimes wild I searched in all the nooks and crannies, seeking fairies, so beguiled I came across a barren meadow; an ancient oak was growing there The tree became a favourite haunt, enthralling every daily jaunt I remember telling grownups of the fairies deep inside my tree They laughed aloud, this silly child, who dared display temerity I often sketched or made up songs about my childhood saga Searching for fairies constantly, whilst eating Italian frittata A child no longer I still reflect upon their negativity Accused of telling fairy tales displaying such proclivity Imagination running wild and full of positivity I did see fairies every day, their nuance their transparency Now looking back the gift I had was wacky and unique They said I must stop lying and of fairies never speak Feeling honoured for this gift, so deep within my marrow I celebrate my childhood visions, dismissing minds so narrow And now each day I watch them play around my old oak tree As they perform a show for me, displaying their fragility Each night they fly high in the sky, with silver gossamer wings Like twinkling stars in a moonlit sky, tugging at my heartstrings Written 29th October 2018 For Eight Word Challenge 9 Poetry Contest Sponsor: John Hamilton 4th placement Contest Strand Choice H Sponsor Brian Strand HONORABLE MENTION

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Date: 12/2/2018 9:12:00 AM
Ann, I enjoyed reading and love the way you used the 8 words .Love the fairy tails I didn't have an imagination , but it would have be nice a piece of happiness . Congratulations on your win.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/2/2018 10:33:00 AM
Thank you so much Eve, so nice to hear your lovely comments. I think sometimes it's good to escape into the land of make believe... Kindest thoughts Ann x
Date: 11/30/2018 9:23:00 AM
A wonderful enchanting write..Congrats on your win..
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/30/2018 12:14:00 PM
Thank you so much for your congrats Joseph, I really appreciate your comment and good to meet you. Kindest thoughts Ann x
Date: 11/27/2018 9:58:00 PM
Congrats Ann on a fine placement!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/28/2018 12:48:00 AM
Gosh, thank you so much John and I want to say how much I enjoyed the challenge of entering your competition, as my imagination went on a great journey. Kindest thoughts Ann x
Date: 11/27/2018 8:20:00 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win in John's 8-word contest, Ann - this was not an easy challenge, but very rewarding, I think. Blessings to you and yours for a wonderful holiday season! :-) <3
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/28/2018 12:55:00 AM
Thank you so much Gregory and sending you many congrats on your top win too. Your poem is beautiful, poignant and so well written. Kindest thoughts Ann x
Date: 10/30/2018 1:19:00 AM
Ann, this is such a beautiful testament to childhood fantasy, faeries, and faith that I forgot you had to come up with eight particular words until I began to spot them at the last second. Nicely done, my friend. Good luck in the contest.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 10/30/2018 1:42:00 AM
Oh bless you Caren for your lovely comments, it is so therapeutic to escape into a lovely fantasy world from time to time and I really enjoyed writing this poem. Sending you fairy kisses, Ann x

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