Fairy Tales

On peeping through the aperture inside the old oak tree
I gasped with wonder to behold the vision that awaited me
For deep inside three fairies slept their delicate wings like lace
To attest their actuality a childhood dream I would embrace

When I was young, a wee small child, sometimes naughty, sometimes wild
I searched in all the nooks and crannies, seeking fairies, so beguiled
I came across a barren meadow; an ancient oak was growing there
The tree became a favourite haunt, enthralling every daily jaunt

I remember telling grownups of the fairies deep inside my tree
They laughed aloud, this silly child, who dared display temerity 
I often sketched or made up songs about my childhood saga
Searching for fairies constantly, whilst eating Italian frittata

A child no longer I still reflect upon their negativity
Accused of telling fairy tales displaying such proclivity
Imagination running wild and full of positivity
I did see fairies every day, their nuance their transparency

Now looking back the gift I had was wacky and unique 
They said I must stop lying and of fairies never speak
Feeling honoured for this gift, so deep within my marrow
I celebrate my childhood visions, dismissing minds so narrow

And now each day I watch them play around my old oak tree
As they perform a show for me, displaying their fragility
Each night they fly high in the sky, with silver gossamer wings
Like twinkling stars in a moonlit sky, tugging at my heartstrings 


Written 29th October 2018
For Eight Word Challenge 9 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: John Hamilton
4th placement

Contest Strand Choice H
Sponsor Brian Strand 
HONORABLE MENTION
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Roper Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 9:12 AM
Ann, I enjoyed reading and love the way you used the 8 words .Love the fairy tails I didn't have an imagination , but it would have be nice a piece of happiness . Congratulations on your win.
Gilmour Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 10:33 AM
Thank you so much Eve, so nice to hear your lovely comments. I think sometimes it's good to escape into the land of make believe... Kindest thoughts Ann x
May Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 9:23 AM
A wonderful enchanting write..Congrats on your win..
Gilmour Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 12:14 PM
Thank you so much for your congrats Joseph, I really appreciate your comment and good to meet you. Kindest thoughts Ann x
Hamilton Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 9:58 PM
Congrats Ann on a fine placement!
Gilmour Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 12:48 AM
Gosh, thank you so much John and I want to say how much I enjoyed the challenge of entering your competition, as my imagination went on a great journey. Kindest thoughts Ann x
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November 27, 2018 at 8:20 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win in John's 8-word contest, Ann - this was not an easy challenge, but very rewarding, I think. Blessings to you and yours for a wonderful holiday season! :-) <3
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November 28, 2018 at 12:55 AM
Thank you so much Gregory and sending you many congrats on your top win too. Your poem is beautiful, poignant and so well written. Kindest thoughts Ann x
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October 30, 2018 at 1:19 AM
Ann, this is such a beautiful testament to childhood fantasy, faeries, and faith that I forgot you had to come up with eight particular words until I began to spot them at the last second. Nicely done, my friend. Good luck in the contest.
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October 30, 2018 at 1:42 AM
Oh bless you Caren for your lovely comments, it is so therapeutic to escape into a lovely fantasy world from time to time and I really enjoyed writing this poem. Sending you fairy kisses, Ann x
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