Fair Maybelle

Fair Maybelle trode through the morning dew
She peered through the foggy haze
Her blue eyes saw what I tell you is true
For the fog did part and the sun did blaze
And a pure white unicorn met her gaze

Now it may well seem it would run away
Or perhaps she would rather shy
But against her nature she hastened to stay
And an unseen cord drew her nigh
Till Maybelle's feet she laid her by

So sweetly Maybelle stroked her hair
She longed for her touch once more
But Maybelle ceased, and she left her there
For what a *wight could see, that her heart was sore
Till she meet her love on the Highdown *Tor

So Maybelle walked o'er the far and near
And her one-horned friend followed light as a bird
And they travelled on without a sight of fear
With but one care and nary a word
That winsome twosome persevered

At the long last, Maybelle heard a pleasant sound
The sound of a rollicking song
And the butterflies danced in the air all around
Whilst her love held her dearly and long
If it could, could it be that she was the theme of his song?

So the three of them lived in the fairyland *wold
Where the sun slips off to the moonlight's glow
Where the wind blows warm and the streams flow cold
And the daffodils thrive in winter's snow
Now here is the end, as you surely know


* Wight: A person
* Tor: A high pointed hill
* Wold: A wood or forest

Written 4/2/2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 8/22/2013 6:47:00 AM
Ahh!! Enjoyed your tale of maiden and unicorn..Congrats on your winning work..Thanks for stopping by..Your visit was uplifting..Sara
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Date: 5/15/2013 1:04:00 AM
Beautiful :) congrats on the win
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Date: 5/14/2013 5:34:00 PM
A great poem and a great win. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/14/2013 7:34:00 AM
Oh, what a wonderful tale. congats on you win..BG
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Date: 5/13/2013 11:51:00 PM
This is so beautiful. Many congrats for the win.
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Date: 5/13/2013 11:31:00 PM
congrats on your first place win in my contest Isaiah
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Date: 5/13/2013 11:13:00 PM
Congratulations Isaiah: A wonderful fairy fantasy . SuZ
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Date: 4/19/2013 12:27:00 PM
Great atmosphere in this poem Isaiah, you really can turn a word and place the reader right there. Well done. Thanks very much for the placing in your contest, and for your nice comment, I enjoyed writing that one Take care, Richard.
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Date: 4/13/2013 10:35:00 AM
My, oh my. I love fantasy, especially when so beautifully written. Well done, Isaiah. You've stolen my heart with this piece. :)
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Date: 4/3/2013 10:36:00 AM
Isaiah: You are in touch with the magical realms and wolds......a wonderful entry. SuZ
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Date: 4/3/2013 10:00:00 AM
- How good and lovely springtime is, this is a beautiful poem Isaiah! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/3/2013 9:54:00 AM
You got me in the mood of singing...She must have been the theme of his song..too..ow yep Interesting new words to put in my vocabulary..and i love those winter daffodils..to mine favs : )
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