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Faint Color On the Horizon

The morning star held onto two other stars just for me to see Faint color at the horizon saying go away bleakness, life come alive For the rain of yesterday has cleaned air and sky

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/9/2009 3:56:00 PM

i can picture this scenery.. so fresh and beautiful--Chrma

James Fraser

Date: 10/9/2009 2:00:00 PM

A crisp view in the sky, shows clarity after the rains have rinsed the earths dusts >> lovely verse Sara >> James

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/9/2009 1:52:00 PM

Beautiful description, Sara! It's amazing what we see when rain cleans the "air and sky." By the way, "Pondering" was amazing. Love, Carolyn

Gert W. Knop

Date: 10/9/2009 6:24:00 AM

Nicely written, Sara. I like your second line and "life come alive". And thanks for your warm comments!...Gert

Brian Strand

Date: 10/8/2009 11:36:00 PM

Sara thank you for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian

John Freeman

Date: 10/8/2009 6:30:00 PM

Let us hope Sara that there is some true color coming into our horizion of life, and that the so many colors of grey dissipate, by a Godly rain of cleansing. Beautiful Libre. Sincerely, Love, Moses THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENTS TODAY, WELCOME AND APPRECIATED

Robin L. Gass

Date: 10/8/2009 6:21:00 PM

This is such beautiful poetry, Sara! Clear and lovely imagery! What a wonder vision to start the day with. Love, Robin

Lynette Chachere

Date: 10/8/2009 4:01:00 PM

Rain is truly beautiful. GReat things happen in the rain^.^ GReat poem.-Lynette

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 10/8/2009 11:34:00 AM

Hello Sara, Thank you for your comments , I dont know about you but for me words are the only way to express myself sometimes , They help me make sence of things and search for the answers i find hard to grasp. This poems reminds me of Africa , I wrote a poem on it. Keep on writting , Night Night God Bless

Jared Pickett

Date: 10/8/2009 9:40:00 AM

I love rain!!!!! The smell before, the drenching during, and the relief that I can FINALLY go be me without getting wet..... Nice write Sara......:JP]

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/8/2009 9:14:00 AM

Lovely poem....can smell the freshness after the rain. ~ Carrie

Brian Strand

Date: 10/8/2009 7:19:00 AM

Lovely title Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Hana Ryusaka

Date: 10/8/2009 6:54:00 AM

Beautiful imagery in this, Sara! Thank you so much for all your kind comments on my poetry, and keep writing =]

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/8/2009 6:46:00 AM

good one mom!!