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I was staring at one of my birdbaths, and the names Cornelius and Flora instantly came to me. I figured they were out there, being frisky by the light of the moon.

A dream remnant floated in the air
A spellbinding way to entice new lovers
A myriad of emotions flooded Cornelius as he
Caressed his true love faerie, Flora
Eternally grateful to find her, he sat back
Admiring her neck, the exact color of his prettiest
Most aromatic roses 
The young lovers bathed in a fresh birdbath
Tantalizingly fun
All melancholy gone, Cornelius was 
Captivated and enchanted by his lady love.
The bud of a weeping almond tree floated gently down,
Gliding onto the top of the water.
The night was tranquil.
Only the moon spied on them
There was a whisper of a breeze
His love song came out, 
He knew he would never love like this again
As he took Flora into his arms and began to dance.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/7/2018 9:07:00 PM
A cute faerie romance! Love the names too :)
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Date: 10/7/2018 6:24:00 PM
this is so sweet . Were those love doves? I guess they were fairies, but it's funny you thought of them by the bird bath!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/7/2018 7:06:00 PM
I was thinking "where would a faerie lover couple bathe?" Bird bath, right?
Date: 10/7/2018 3:35:00 PM
Wait a minute- I thought you couldn't do flowery love poems?!! (Evidently all you needed were some faeries thrown in to make it work!...) ;) Beautifully done!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/7/2018 7:07:00 PM
I can do FAERIE love poems. Not so intimidating.
Date: 10/7/2018 11:59:00 AM
you make me drool with this sweet, elegant read...very imaginative, caren... huggs
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/7/2018 1:51:00 PM
thank you Nette. I just started writing down what other people do and threw it together in ABC mode.
Date: 10/7/2018 9:29:00 AM
Nice tribute to nature, dear Caren. Much love, Adeniji
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