Fading Summer

Spring, always
just a few weeks away.
Dark branches begin to bud wet 
I knew you couldn't stay.   

How I remember our first Fall, 
and the long Winter most of all.

I must make amends and start again,
isn't it funny how love resets.
Wi' misty hands of time 
we're bound to forget,
our fading summer.
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Kendrick Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 3:34 AM
I like this one but not sure I really understand the meaning. Spring seems conducive to love so it would be a time for romance. Thank you for sharing it with us. I like the flow and the feeling it incites. Sara K
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October 2, 2025 at 5:08 AM
A poem straight from the heart Richard….times passed and times ahead….beautifully written! Belated Congrats on POTD! Debx
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 5:35 PM
a touching poem...tis true...love does reset. How often hubby and I have made amends, especially during the heat of summer (metaphorical)
Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 10:47 PM
Back with a fave on this one! Why didn't I do it before!
Layne Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 7:49 AM
Nice write!
Theraven Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 7:55 PM
Hello Trina, Thank you for this comment. I'm listening to Prince Roger Nelson singing "When Doves Cry" while reading "And There were Three" Suppose there's worse things a guy could be up to on a Saturday night. "] -Richard
Radice Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 12:59 PM
The beauty of your poem lies in its honesty and simplicity. Cheers - Gary
Theraven Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 7:40 PM
Hi Gary, Thank you for this inspirational comment. Your name and avatar piqued my memory of the poem you wrote back in April 2021. "Miss Amelia Havisham's Garden Shed", read aloud by Line. Even the abridged copy of Charles Dickens' novel 'Great Expectations' appeared daunting to me as required high school reading. But the pages fly by if you identify with any of the characters as many do. -Richard
Harp Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 11:41 PM
What a gorgeous, smooth poem, and the brevity is so concise. I can see why it was chosen to the the POTD! Congratulations.
Theraven Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 7:09 PM
Hello Moon, Thanks for this comment. What I hope for someday in some way, someone remembers somebody special. Someone they thought they'd lost but only forgot. -Richard
George Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 11:33 PM
Beautiful poem on the changing seasons. Congratulations friend on your POTD honor.
Theraven Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 6:56 PM
Hello Valsa, Thank you for this comment. Have a wonderful Saturday evening friend. -Richard
Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 10:00 PM
Ooh la la. A POTD. I know how to pick them!
Theraven Avatar
September 26, 2025 at 6:08 PM
Hello Andrea, Thank you, and thank you again for Ooh la la. I told my brother about you and your amazing journey through PS. -Richard
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September 24, 2025 at 6:03 PM
Congratulations on your POTD. A beautiful rhyming poem connecting love and memories of passing seasons.
Theraven Avatar
September 26, 2025 at 5:50 PM
Malabika, Thank you for leaving this comment. Always wonder at the meaning of names people carry around all of their lives. Malabika "one who is adorned with flowers" Sanskrit Best wishes for a happy Autumn, -Richard
Greenhough Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 4:44 PM
Congratulations on POTD. Your poem is wonderful.
Theraven Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 6:56 PM
Hi Hilda, Thank you for this, it's much appreciated! -Richard
Hind Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 4:14 PM
Beautiful, Quoth, really- I love the ending, congrats on POTD !!!
Theraven Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 8:32 PM
Hi Paige, Thank you for this, I was very surprised as you could imagine. Some days seems you throw every line in the water and get only a few nibbles. Then on a rare cast you reel in a whopper on Mister Ronco's Pocket Fisherman, it's crazy. -Richard
Fowler Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 2:14 PM
This is fabulous Richard. Our love, no matter how new or old begins to fade away without the hope of Spring. Congratulations! :)
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September 25, 2025 at 5:49 AM
:)
Theraven Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 7:59 PM
Linda, Thank you for that comment. Important for me to mention to you that I've always enjoyed the curious stare of that wide-eyed avatar owl. -Richard
Nicole Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 2:05 PM
' Spring, I knew you couldn't stay. ' So true, because with seasons, they are here one moment and then gone the next. Life is the same. Cherish each moment, and embrace the beauty of every season. Congratulations Quoth Theraven, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Theraven Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 7:49 PM
Hello Brandy, Thank you for your thoughtful insight. I'll miss last summer I fear. Just not now, not today. -Richard
Rodgers Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 1:06 PM
Hello Raven, Congrats on POTD! the seasons in your lines don’t just pass they consecrate memory, grief, and the strange mercy of forgetting. Blessings, My Friend Daniel
Theraven Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 7:32 PM
Hi Daniel, Thank you for this eye catching comment. "the strange mercy of forgetting" I think I could get used to that. On thr subject of memory, I read that Egyptians believed that a person dies twice: once when their physical body dies and again when their name is spoken for the last time. -Richard
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September 24, 2025 at 10:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Fading Summer" write. Our fading summer will return next year for us to enjoy... Have a fun day with your win as you go writing away..........
Theraven Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 11:33 AM
Paula, Thank you for this poetic response! Although this Summer went by so quickly, I'm thankful for family' memories. Wish you a wonderful day of writing as well. -Richard
Seeker Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 7:48 AM
Beautiful musings, Quoth. Reflective and soulful. Congratulations on POTD
Theraven Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 11:21 AM
Hello Unseeking, Thank you for this comment. From my perspective; hard to know where one's going without looing back at others who took a similar path. -Richard
Rodrigues Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 5:26 AM
Perhaps a Summer can forget but forever seasons cannot..such is my Dad. This is a beautiful poem of letting go of love, making amends and reset. Congratulations on POTD!
Theraven Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 11:15 AM
Kim, Thank you for this comment. Since I am a Dad (love how you capitalized) I'm a bit curious about those seasons. Perhaps I'll find the answer in your poems. Like the poem "Those We Love". At the end of the day we only have each other. -Richard
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September 24, 2025 at 5:19 AM
Oh, beautiful. Love this. Congratulations on POTD. God bless you. love, Gina
Theraven Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 10:42 AM
Hello Regina, Thank you for your comment. In reply to Andrea I mentioned; always other wonderful poems waiting their day. Your poem "Fear Is Gone" is one of them. Hate to fall down the rabbit hole of leaving comments. I never left one for you. Of course I can fix this. But I also want to share this POTD with yours. May God bless you too. -Richard
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September 24, 2025 at 4:14 AM
loved the touch of remembrance in this well penned poem. congrats on POTD
Theraven Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 10:22 AM
Hi Sara, Thank you for the comment. I've watched with much interest your poetry's meteoric rise on PoetrySoup. Feel this second day of Autumn is a lucky one, for no other reason than you never know if it's your last. Sorry for being so chatty. Similar to my comment to Tania - "Every dog has its..." And I hope this one is good to you. -Richard
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September 24, 2025 at 3:38 AM
Qouth, wonderfully penned, congratulations on POTD.
Theraven Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 9:54 AM
Hi Tania, Thank you for the comment. Every dog has its day. I hope this one is good to you. -Richard
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September 24, 2025 at 1:11 AM
- Spring is always a new beginning ... after a long cold winter - Summer is the shortest time (in Norway) ... with a "puff" it is gone ... autumn brings rain, wind and bare trees ... not as beautiful as we write about ... the night frost is here already, Richard - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ... enjoy :) - hugs
Theraven Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 9:46 AM
Hello Anne-Lise, Thank you, fond memories of that frost. Though not of the Boreal forests of Norway. Maybe someday... Fall and Winter are great teachers. Can't help but feel a little sadness for those who live in other latitudes where seasons rarely change. -Richard
Dietrich Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 3:13 PM
I am with CayCay. Something about this is just so touching. A fave
Theraven Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 9:34 AM
Hi Andrea, Big thank you first, this poem was hurried, I'm sure you can tell. But I had nothing else to give, maybe you can relate. I'm just as sure someone else worked very hard to tell a story through wonderful poetry and is probably more deserving. But there's absolutely a reason to the rhyme. -Richard
Godwin Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 12:30 PM
I don't even know why, but I really like this and after I post this comment, I am going to study it a bit because 'something' sure enough, heart-hit me. Between the brevity and vagueness is something concrete and complicated.
Theraven Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 9:22 AM
Hi CayCay, Thank you for this and you're right. Poetry comes from someplace and much of mine of late; giving individuals a voice who can no longer speak for themselves. This poem is a poor attempt to begin to tell the story of a young woman who died in 2023. She was laid to rest in an ancient graveyard not far from the Danube River. -Richard
Sands Avatar
September 23, 2025 at 11:26 AM
Great poem Richard. I can feel this. Well done :)
Theraven Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 9:06 AM
Morning Heidi, Thank you, it's so nice to hear from you! -Richard
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