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For Ink Empress contest - Fading Photographs

 

Fading Photographs

Some poems are poured
when a poet loses someone,
so those who cannot write,
feel words mirroring their souls.

Since the betrayal of your blind vision,
I've been roaming in realms of broken reflections.
In your aquarium existence,
I've let my emotions sink to the bottom.
Remember, when I was your first thought,
a jewel in your celebrated crown -
now I'm just a pebble in a dirty puddle.

It all started with a camera flash.
With an obsession of clicks,
we captured an anthology of amorous portraits.
But now our love is a fading photograph,
forgotten in the sun,
edges curling, colours bleeding,
where only faint faces remain.

A butterfly romance,
becoming more fragile over time.
Vivid scarlet hearts, once beating rapidly,
now echo in distant blurs

and all I feel are the saddest sighs.

In seasons of saudade,
I've become an abandoned snapshot 
of an erased existence.
Yet I still yearn for the taste of your lips,
to break this haunting hunger.

Helpless, lost in a desert storm,
footprints left behind,
dissolve with the wind,
each particle floating away,
forever misplaced - disjointed.

Memories become like starlight spirits,
as silhouettes and shadows
dance under a moonlight sonata,
slowly burning away all
traces of permanence,
so all that's left behind is an imprisoned moon,
clouded in a dark hymn sky.

All my eyes seem to envision
is a maroon monsoon.
Now my fingers are too afraid 
to create another photograph - 
as some memories bring back 
a waterfall of sorrows.
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Neumann Avatar
December 10, 2024 at 6:56 AM
a jewel in your celebrated crown - now I'm just a pebble in a dirty puddle. In seasons of saudade, I've become an abandoned snapshot Now my fingers are too afraid to create another photograph - as some memories bring back a waterfall of sorrows. This is very intense and so true. Wonderfully expressed.
Dutta Avatar
October 26, 2024 at 9:36 PM
‘ broken reflection’… ‘ butterfly romance’ ‘seasons of saudade’…. ‘ maroon monsoon ‘… So poetic ! Last stanza is amazing. Blessings
George Avatar
October 12, 2024 at 7:29 PM
"In seasons of saudade, I've become an abandoned snapshot of an erased existence." What a piercing lament!! Such a moving , emotive poem with a waterfall of sorrows. All those failed in love can relate to this poem of intense heartache, longing and loss. Though the 'butterfly romance' has faded over time, the fire hasn't died out, but blazing inside like a funeral pyre. So very powerful diction and imagery. Congratulations on your top win, dear Silent One.
Dietrich Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 4:54 PM
Back with my congrats. The perfect example of a number one winw
Leach Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 1:02 PM
Another exceptionally penned poem. Being left behind can be very sad.
Goldsmith Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 12:51 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Fading Photographs" write. It is hard to go from "a jewel in your celebrated crown - now I'm just a pebble in a dirty puddle." Why do people/families/friends do this??? Great memories are the best kind to have but some memories bring a waterfall of tears. "Write On" Enjoy Your Day...........
Davey Avatar
October 6, 2024 at 12:25 PM
What else is their to say that hasn't already been said my friend...Simply Amazing!! well deserved
Empress Avatar
October 5, 2024 at 1:56 PM
Dear silent one, its always a brilliant poem from you, profound, sumptuous diction throughout, and such creative metaphors and alliterations flowing in such a seamless manner as always! This poem can resonate with many that are broken hearted, and i think many have been there atleast once, as life is a never-ending journey of changes the only thing constant is change but somethings remain. And i really love the lines “A butterfly romance, becoming more fragile over time.” Time can be cruel! “ so all that's left behind is an imprisoned moon, clouded in a dark hymn sky.” i love imprisoned moon! Thats deep! Pleasure always reading your work and thank you for supporting my contest! Congratulations on your win!
Babcock Avatar
October 5, 2024 at 10:54 AM
An emotional write with depth and sadness. Well said and well written. love phyl
Dietrich Avatar
October 4, 2024 at 5:20 PM
Waterfall of sorrows was such a profound ending for this emotive poem rich in imagery.
Kendrick Avatar
October 4, 2024 at 12:59 PM
That waterfall would be massive sorrow on a hurricane day. I enjoyed reading your descriptions. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Sara K
Williams Avatar
October 2, 2024 at 4:19 AM
I remember reading your wonderful poem, and thought I had commented here? Maybe it was FB. In any case a Gem that's sure to do well in Ink's contest, however good luck dear S1...Hugs
Bartholomew Avatar
October 1, 2024 at 4:45 AM
It's never too late to love when you still have the chance and always worth it to try. This is so sad yet beautiful... sometimes ppl lose contact due to miscommunication or misconception and then later realize when they're alone to see the truth. Love this write.
Hind Avatar
September 27, 2024 at 4:56 PM
Deep poetry, Silent....it showed true heart.
Buhagiar Avatar
September 26, 2024 at 12:38 PM
There is something magical in the way you use metaphors.: I especially liked blind vision, a pebble in a dirty puddle, a dark hymn sky and last but not least, a waterfall of sorrows.
Poet Avatar
September 24, 2024 at 4:13 PM
Wonderful poem that explores themes of loss, nostalgia, and the fragility of love, dear friend. It reflects the emotional aftermath of a relationship that has deteriorated, illustrating the deep sense of longing and sorrow experienced by the speaker.
Medders Tobechi Avatar
September 23, 2024 at 2:03 PM
I love it. Such sensuous, deep lines, photographs of the memory. Best wishes. Love, Janis
blegh Avatar
September 22, 2024 at 9:49 AM
"Now my fingers are too afraid to create another photograph - as some memories bring back a waterfall of sorrows." this poem resonates with a profound ache .. pleasure reading
DiMino Avatar
September 21, 2024 at 6:49 AM
"Memories become like starlight spirits, as silhouettes and shadows dance under a moonlight sonata," -- Wow! Memorable original imagery. Well Done!
Liguori Avatar
September 20, 2024 at 2:01 PM
What a deeply emotional poem. So much imagery. Thanks for sharing.
Narain Avatar
September 20, 2024 at 9:25 AM
Nice poem. Love never dies.
Lane Avatar
September 20, 2024 at 8:00 AM
Some of your phrases will touch wounded hearts. When in love, there are pictures that were never taken with a camera that will remain in our mind. They will never fade from memory. A butterfly romance is fragile and none the less real for having a short life span of existence. The Harry Styles video perfectly exemplifies your last verse. Excellently written.
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