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Fading photographs

Surreal sonnets found their way into the cavern of emptiness, Scrolling through rusting rhymes and concrete couplets, All in a chaotic cadence of crème de la crème. This hard-held heart barely softened for the colors in the fading photographs. What can the mere past do to these strings of stones, When the dents from adrenaline-filled butterflies Remain as few frozen water droplets, Resting on an ocean-wide dinner table, Questioning what lives and what wilts? Have these hands abandoned the will to hold the moon? For the absurd symphonies your worn-out wounds sing Do not touch the skin of my ears. Naive senses were the first silk to pay for lost love. Delusions are funny when they play, Crystal ball showing doves, Promising everlasting angelic bells from above. What difference does it make When words can only be breathtaking as they float, Without a beat, without bones? The malicious necessity behind a heathen and it’s horns, Making pouring Polaroids out of dreams and thorns. For beyond a portrait of murky eclipses, there is nothing more, Just ravenous ravens and stale blue shores.

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Date: 10/5/2024 1:42:00 PM
Papi! Finally you get first place in a contest of mine haha! Well you wrote this one in such a creative and moving manner, i actually felt the melancholic emotions flowing throughout this poem, and your use of metaphors and descriptive language really makes your poem stand out! I especially love “ What difference does it make When words can only be breathtaking as they float, Without a beat, without bones? ” as you know i love questions in a poem and this one stirred my soul!Congratulations
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Date: 9/15/2024 9:40:00 AM
Dear Lioness, your potent pen pours stunning imagery and metaphors upon the poetic page that stir one's heart and soul in a though-provoking way. A sense of loss, of sentimentality spurned, of melancholy in memories, of experiencing hopelessness is keenly felt. I was especially struck by "What difference does it make/When words can only be breathtaking as they float,/Without a beat, without bones?" -wow! It gives the sense that words without actions are meaningless. Your last two lines a grand expression of feeling empty inside. Deep, rich remarkable poetry! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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