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fading photographs

beneath the gnarled b r a n c h e s, a photo rests within my clutch. time d r i p s like h o n e y e d amber; i long for vanished visions, saudade, a muffled heartache. s moonlight streaks through tangled trees; h a silken s i l h o u e t t e shrouds my aura. t a gentle caress grazes my shoulder, o memories of her touch f l u t t e r like m the past entangles with the present; the scent of f a d e d jasmine lingers. as the night drones on softly, cold air wraps around my wistful longing. poison ivy clings to crumbling cemetery walls. i look to the heavens for answers, as the sky weeps and squalls in erupting solar storms. her scattered ashes settle like snowflakes, softly blanketing the remnants of forgotten joys, cradling memories like delicate g l a s s. the red thread of family ties is now seve / / red; the roots asphyxiate on generational sorrow. if the olive trees knew what became of hands that planted them, their oil would become t e a r s. time’s relentless hand ticks on, while decaying hearts beat like distant d r u m s, resounding in the silence of cursed solitude.

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Date: 10/5/2024 1:45:00 PM
Hi sis, i didnt know this was written by you when i was judging but something about the way youv written this in such a descriptive manner really made me go wow! Beautiful imagery and so poignant with so many emotions flowing throughout this! I especially loved the lines “The scent of faded jasmine lingers. As the night drones on softly, Cold air wraps around my wistful longing.” The kind of thing i might also write as it resonated. Very well written! And also, the ending relates and reflects the heart wrenching truth witnessed in some parts of the world right now! Impeccable! Powerful write! Fave it is! Congratulations on your win
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Date: 9/18/2024 10:06:00 AM
This poem is very good my love. I love lines like "Time drips like honeyed amber","Her scattered ashes settle like snowflakes", and "The roots asphyxiate on generational sorrow". Such sorrow can be felt in this writing and heartfelt beatiful imagery.
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Billie Jama
Date: 9/20/2024 9:40:00 AM
Thank you so much my love. The darkness of your poetry inspires me.
Date: 9/13/2024 6:11:00 AM
Dear Billie, Reading your lovely poem it truly conveys a deep sense of melancholy and reflection on the impermanence of life and relationships. I enjoyed the journey exploring how memories and emotions persist long after physical presence has faded. Well Inked! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Billie Jama
Date: 9/20/2024 9:41:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poetry.

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