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Fading Glow of Summer

The beauty of the varnished moon, a flame so wondrous to behold with light surrounding trees and hills in velvet ribbons of crimson-gold: Though August beams illuminate Along a ride over the sea it mirrors this heat’s waning gleam Diffusing one last potpourri. Gone is the luster of summer’s blaze just frail embers quivering low… and melting like an ice cube tray when Fall arrives without a glow. Darkness comes with an epilogue, Winds hush as the sun disappears I open my secret box …empty , Till mild rain falls silent as tears.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/26/2018 12:57:00 AM
Back to congratulate you again for your win again. Beautiful.
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Date: 8/22/2018 9:13:00 PM
Congrats again on your win, nette. Lovely.
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Date: 8/22/2018 2:56:00 PM
This one, I would have placed higher! Lovely work as always, Nette :)
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Date: 7/4/2018 11:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful poem. Well done!
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Date: 7/4/2018 9:58:00 PM
Congrats on your win, nette. Well penned.
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Date: 7/4/2018 12:43:00 PM
Congrats Nette, it's quite lovely--and great use of imagery!
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Date: 7/4/2018 5:06:00 AM
Nette congrats.
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Date: 7/2/2018 2:49:00 AM
Nette.. Congrats on being a featured poet this week. This esquestrtpoem is certainly worthy of that recognition. Blessings!
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Date: 7/2/2018 1:44:00 AM
A glowing poem to end my day with Nette. This is just outstanding in imagery and in content! I love it! Congratulations on having this featured! : )
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Date: 5/12/2018 6:52:00 AM
Beautiful, nette. Love your poem.
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Date: 5/2/2018 2:41:00 AM
Lovely image of a fading summer, I must admit I love late September before autumn hits. Good luck Nette. Tom
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Date: 5/2/2018 1:15:00 AM
Excellent. Well imagery write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 5/1/2018 5:31:00 PM
Beautiful imagery Nelle, enjoyed reading , good luck in the contest... Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 5/1/2018 4:25:00 PM
Darkness comes with a curtain call, what a wonderful line, in a wonderful poem, yes you indeed take one there. nette
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