Fading Glow of Summer

The beauty of the varnished moon, a flame so wondrous to behold with light surrounding trees and hills in velvet ribbons of crimson-gold: Though August beams illuminate Along a ride over the sea it mirrors this heat’s waning gleam Diffusing one last potpourri. Gone is the luster of summer’s blaze just frail embers quivering low… and melting like an ice cube tray when Fall arrives without a glow. Darkness comes with an epilogue, Winds hush as the sun disappears I open my secret box …empty , Till mild rain falls silent as tears.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
August 26, 2018 at 12:57 AM
Back to congratulate you again for your win again. Beautiful.
Gauthier Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 9:13 PM
Congrats again on your win, nette. Lovely.
Richards Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 2:56 PM
This one, I would have placed higher! Lovely work as always, Nette :)
Gentry Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 11:20 PM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful poem. Well done!
Gauthier Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 9:58 PM
Congrats on your win, nette. Well penned.
Carber Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 12:43 PM
Congrats Nette, it's quite lovely--and great use of imagery!
Chutani Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 5:06 AM
Nette congrats.
Man Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 2:49 AM
Nette.. Congrats on being a featured poet this week. This esquestrtpoem is certainly worthy of that recognition. Blessings!
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 1:44 AM
A glowing poem to end my day with Nette. This is just outstanding in imagery and in content! I love it! Congratulations on having this featured! : )
Gauthier Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 6:52 AM
Beautiful, nette. Love your poem.
Cunningham Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 2:41 AM
Lovely image of a fading summer, I must admit I love late September before autumn hits. Good luck Nette. Tom
Sathasivam Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 1:15 AM
Excellent. Well imagery write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Roper Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 5:31 PM
Beautiful imagery Nelle, enjoyed reading , good luck in the contest... Hugs Eve ~`*
Horsman Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 4:25 PM
Darkness comes with a curtain call, what a wonderful line, in a wonderful poem, yes you indeed take one there. nette
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