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Fading From a Distance

We held the ash of paling revery how fast, through shadows blowing out the night but then, it faded; lost in times remote in places where I had been known to you. But flash and fade, the breach of this union erased me from glint of ardor that once embraced a wise and knowing vow; entwined with bliss, laughter and the intensity of profound hope you plucked from the earth-- a kind that was difficult to siphon root to stem. God knew it hurt... but I am learning still to have my soul ignite and heal away: Oh, you-- your distant voice , still finds and wraps me in your presence, in your glaze. It's there that slays an intercepted light, this memory of us-- growing ever dim. Best Free Verse in April (not for a contest) For Laura Loo 4/26/2018

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Date: 4/29/2018 10:44:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your placement. Hugs sweet lady
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Date: 4/28/2018 2:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this sorrowful love poem. Your ability to express emotions so that I can feel them is remarkable.
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Date: 4/28/2018 1:55:00 PM
Back with congrats, nette, on your well deserved win.
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Date: 4/28/2018 12:50:00 PM
oh sweet Nette, I am never surprised to see you on the winners list, you never cease to amaze me with your beautiful gift. thank you and congratulations on your placement. ;)-luloo
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Date: 4/26/2018 9:42:00 AM
So deep and evocative, Nette. Only one who has truly experienced love could create this beautiful expression. lovely xxoo
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Date: 4/26/2018 8:56:00 AM
Love your profound poem, nette, such is the feeling from your pen.
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Date: 4/26/2018 7:02:00 AM
The old saying: Time heals everything. Wonderful writing, dear Nette.
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Date: 4/26/2018 6:28:00 AM
An explosion of feelings in lines like...God knew it hurt... but I am learning still to have my soul ignite and heal away..you r words paint a memory growing dim yearning to heal..well written, nette.
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Date: 4/25/2018 7:57:00 PM
Wonderful...Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/25/2018 7:22:00 PM
A deep something there...an ever burning fire...a desire for unification with the source of love...walking through emotions...
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Date: 4/25/2018 6:40:00 PM
Lovely and emotional, nette.
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Date: 4/25/2018 5:20:00 PM
Heartbreaking expression of pained love masterfully composed from from your aching, intense pen!
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