Premiere Contest WinnerFading Fragile

Fading and fragile, a small shadow frailly rest upon tears of battle. Should joy ever again need me aware, it would do well to seek me there.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 12/20/2017 2:58:00 PM
This poem touches me quite deeply. It says quite a lot in 4 little lines. Great job and congratulations!
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Date: 11/28/2017 11:36:00 PM
I came back to this one. It really is masterclass. Its brevity is perfect . Quite breath taking.
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Date: 11/15/2017 9:50:00 PM
CayCay, this poem is such a scintillating gem! Such depth of sad expression, your second line is breathtaking. Excellent and so enjoyed! Warmest wishes always! ~Susan
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 11/18/2017 10:20:00 AM
Thank you, Susan. It is wonderful when someone reads 'older' postings, bringing them out of the shadows where they all too quickly go. I appreciate you very much ... CayCay
Date: 12/19/2016 6:07:00 AM
Sorry this Congratulations is late. So nice to see this brilliant poem take the trophy my friend! 7 + ; )
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Date: 12/18/2016 10:47:00 PM
This is sweet, to the point and well put. Definitely a winner. Congratulations.
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Date: 12/18/2016 8:16:00 AM
Sad but Sweetly succinct, CayCay:) Though I'm pretty late, my heartfelt congratulations on your win:)
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Date: 12/17/2016 7:48:00 PM
Awesome poem CayCay
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Date: 12/16/2016 11:44:00 PM
wow, is this the one from Brian. AWESOME POEM and awesome win, sweet friend. Congratulations.
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Date: 12/16/2016 12:03:00 AM
Way to go, CayCay. : ) Not surprising - this poem fits together immaculately well.
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Date: 12/15/2016 8:14:00 PM
Hi CayCay, Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/15/2016 7:21:00 PM
A 7 for this concise, powerful, TOP winning poem, CayCay! Janice
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Date: 12/15/2016 6:40:00 PM
CayCay, congratulations on your first place win. Lovely poem. ~ Sonia
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Date: 12/15/2016 7:29:00 AM
CayCay, congratulations on your well-deserved First Place Trophy win for this wonderful treasure of deepest emotion expressed in so few words! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/15/2016 6:46:00 AM
Such vivid emotion! Congrats on your top win!
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Date: 12/15/2016 4:25:00 AM
Way to go CayCay!
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Date: 12/15/2016 4:15:00 AM
Congratulations CayCay :)
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Date: 12/15/2016 2:20:00 AM
A great win with a superb piece of poetry!
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Date: 12/10/2016 11:56:00 PM
Makes me feel I have to say sorry. So beautiful
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Date: 12/7/2016 11:43:00 AM
Congratulations on the win, CayCay. I had to read this several times before really getting its seductive nature. A wonderful write from a wonderful poet!
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Date: 12/7/2016 9:04:00 AM
Congrats CayCay to win. Hugs
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Date: 12/7/2016 1:12:00 AM
Hi CayCay, This is a good take on the contest theme. I see that you're on the winning list. Congratulations . It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/6/2016 9:08:00 AM
A truly defining, refined translation, congrats CayCay!
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Date: 12/5/2016 11:26:00 PM
Excellent and congratulations!..Larry
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Date: 12/5/2016 3:44:00 PM
So succinctly said with your beautiful short poem, CayCay. Congrats! Agnes
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Date: 12/5/2016 2:52:00 PM
Literally light-headed after reading this poem. One of those moments when I smile and shake my head at the beauty and wonder of it. Finely crafted, and hard-hitting in its brevity, I see this inscribed in gold on the finest porcelain.
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 12/5/2016 5:28:00 PM
Doug, I'm not sure I've 'met' you before so I would love to visit your pages when it isn't dinner time. Your complimentary comments may be the best ones I have ever had the pleasure of reading. I cannot tell you how happy I am that you shared your reactions with me! Thank you, Doug. All the best ... CayCay
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