Fading

"Before a leaf-bud has burst, its whole life acts; in the full-blown flower there is no more, in the leafless root there is no less" - Ralph Waldo Emerson


I'm a sunflower, 
dipped in honey of 
bittersweet bronze smiles, 
admiring its soulmate 
strolling around the sun, 
in sombre shine of 
eclipsed dawn, whilst 
these faes lure poisoned 
pollens with flaming 
ruby red ocean foams, 
And I see a peculiar 
patchwork on knitted 
canopies, which are 
sprouting clayey hearts 
out of crimson crooned 
willow branches. 

Crumbling to pixies, 
falling lifeless like fragile 
leaflets in autumnal carols, 
I believe, twin flame 
telepathy is a souvenir 
of roses and thorns, 
which emerges as wanton 
wildfire on the brim of 
ocean's moon-song 
in mellifluous mystery, 
outlining turmoil in 
turquoise land of trolls. 
For, magnetised feathers 
on matte lips always get 
soaked in ashey sighs 
of regret, whenever 
bewitching conspiracy 
of his amethyst eyes, 
befalls in dialects of 
forest's echoes and the 
brittle skin of basilisk 
slithers with a deadly gaze 
upon my mulberry heart.

Chasing seasonal winds, 
I became the fading mist 
that succumbs to the 
sheath of amber rays, 
infusing in my lungs, 
and suffocating my love for life;
Amidst these broken skies, 
you left shadows of 
pencil-sketched debris, 
that float like wisps 
of faulty daffodils, 
distorting my dreams 
and twisting thy truths, 
in hellfire horizon that 
sets our graves apart, 
beyond million miles of 
satanic soliloquies.

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Date: 10/9/2023 2:33:00 PM
Hiya, excellent writing and congratulations on your win in my contest, love your quote, Constance
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Date: 9/27/2023 4:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win, Hiya. Your brilliant choice of words and use of striking imageries are outstanding! I am getting inspired with your excellent creativity, Dear Poet. Love and Hugs ~
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Date: 9/27/2023 4:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Hiya! You are a prominent winner at PS! Poetry like this; "distorting my dreams and twisting thy truths, in hellfire horizon that sets our graves apart, beyond million miles of satanic soliloquies" allures and gives me chills. xoxo Anaya
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Date: 9/26/2023 12:58:00 AM
- "I became the fading mist that succumbs to the sheath of amber rays, infusing in my lungs, and suffocating my love for life; Amidst these broken skies ... " lines I had to read over and over again, Hiya ... the last part of your poem is dramatized ... an excellent poem :) - hugs
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Date: 9/25/2023 8:48:00 PM
Hiya, your vocabulary is just amazing and you have a special ability for joining together disparate images and producing startling effects. I stand awestruck, blinded by your brilliance. "I became the fading mist, that succumbs to the sheath of amber rays". I feel, this you have said of me. Before your amber rays, I am the fading mist.
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Date: 9/25/2023 2:48:00 PM
Creative lines you have penned in this imaginative work. Sunflowers are beauties that delight in the sun of each day. Their seeds are a delightful treat for birds. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 9/25/2023 2:31:00 PM
Dear friend Hiya, your poem is truly exquisite, filled with stunning visuals that dance in the play of light and darkness. The metaphors are like delicate flowers, carefully chosen adjectives and introspective language intricately woven into every line. It left me completely mesmerized, as I could feel the deep sadness and melancholy that flowed through the verses in a harmonious rhythm.
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Date: 9/25/2023 10:42:00 AM
I'm a sunflower, dipped in honey of bittersweet bronze smiles----I believe, twin flame telepathy is a souvenir of roses and thorns--- I became the fading mist that succumbs to the sheath of amber rays--you paint your poetic canvas elegantly, Hiya. Of course a FAVE from me for your brilliant designs of words --shining gems!
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Date: 9/25/2023 9:53:00 AM
Nicely penned, vivid imagery, satanic soliloquies, quite a show,
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Date: 9/25/2023 7:18:00 AM
Beautiful imagery dappled in light and shadows.
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Date: 9/25/2023 6:27:00 AM
Goodness, that last stanza is quite dramatic. Hellfire horizons and satanic soliloquies. I like how she starts out as a sunflower. Maybe, after a bit, she'll face the sun once more and yet flourish
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Date: 9/25/2023 6:22:00 AM
Satanic Soliloquies! What a most brilliant poem this is! The metaphors use of flowers and adjectives and descriptive diction woven so meticulously throughout left me truly in awe! I felt the sadness and melancholic misery that flowed in mellifluous rhythm throughout your lines! I really love that quote too youve used here and also sunflowers are my fave too so i love how uv started the poem here too! And so many lines stood out for me especially “ oceans moon song” “float like wisps of faulty
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Date: 9/25/2023 6:23:00 AM
Daffodils and “ pencil sketched debris” Such deep and poignant as well as artistic lines that truly blew me away! I loved reading this! And fits the theme of the prompt eloquently! Goodluck for the contest. You’ve nailed it
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