Beryl Edmonds Poet Rhyme

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Facing the Storm

Facing the Storm
Had my ego shorn and heart torn today
The reason, I am hesitant to say
I'll retain it to myself, no one else
But then, who on earth would care anyway.

On reflection someone out there does care
All one needs do is kneel down in prayer
Revealing one's heart, though the tears may start
To God who’s always aware of despair.

God helps to put things into perceptive
Auto rectified are inner conflicts 
You, me and us - all we need is God's love
To sooth, reassure, fortify and fix.

So after nursing my bruised shorn ego
I silently made contact with the Lord
Prayed for the light to shine brightly tonight
My ego transcended, my heart it soared.

With heart intact, ego restored, reborn
I have will to weather the fiercest storm.
8th July 2022
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Sally Harris June 3, 2023 at 5:48 PM WOW. this here is just what i needed to read and it is right on time. its crazy how we feel sometimes that no one cares, when in all reality, people do care. you are right though, God cares more than we will ever understand. i look forward to reading more of your pieces . i must say, i am impressed as well. you have alot of work on here. if you dont mind, can i ask you how long you have been writting and what inspired you to start writting... Sally Harris June 4, 2023 at 2:52 PM thank you for sharing that. amazing 60 years of poetry. the things you seen and experienced. i think it's cool you still have that book. have you ever shared any of that. I'm sure that teacher somehow knew that she was an inspiration to you. Beryl Edmonds June 3, 2023 at 7:26 PM Thank you Sally. I started to write poetry when I was 14 years old, that’s 60 years ago. A teacher at school got us pupils in her class to write an anthology of verse. I enjoyed the project so much, I still have the book of poems I wrote and have written poetry ever since. I often wish I could tell that teacher how she inspired my love of poetry… Belle

Valsa George July 31, 2022 at 8:50 PM Once we know that God is there to hear all our sighs and feel all our pain, kneel down in prayer before Him ! He will ease all our heart aches . A beautiful poem dear Belle, highlighting the need to rely on God Beryl Edmonds August 12, 2022 at 12:22 PM Sorry I missed your reply Valsa, thank you very much for your encouraging words… Belle

Jennifer Proxenos July 29, 2022 at 10:26 AM Belle, i love your poetry this one is no exception, you are a special poetess, and a loyal friend. You were brave to write this and look how you felt after you reached out - Just remember if you go through any fierce storm I am merely across the pond and contactable 24/7. hugs, blessings. Jennifer Beryl Edmonds July 29, 2022 at 4:14 PM Thank you so much dear Jennifer, my husband has gone back into hospital today, he became very ill during the night and has got an infection. I hope and pray it’s not as serious as it was when he had sepsis he was recovering nicely and now this. Hugs and blessings… Belle

Gershon Wolf July 23, 2022 at 8:25 PM That's right! Someone Does Care! And He makes Himself available at a moment's notice. How easily we forget Him. How important it is not to. Great write, Belle. :) gw Beryl Edmonds July 29, 2022 at 4:20 PM Thank you Gershon, it is easy to forget there’s a God who cares until we need him of course, I need Him now as my hubby took ill during last night and is in hospital fighting a virus… Belle

Michael Tor July 18, 2022 at 9:55 AM Belle I hope your doing fine Dear. Wish I could say something to comfort you. Sometimes People can be so mean. When they are just forgive them for they know not what they do and turn it over to Jesus he will fix and love you. God bless you Belle hope your day is much better. You are a wonderful writer... Beryl Edmonds July 18, 2022 at 5:20 PM Michael, thank you for your comforting words, life is too short to hold grudges, though it hurts for a while I do forgive when someone is mean and yes prayer does help… Belle

Bill Baker July 16, 2022 at 4:28 PM Thanks for the inspiring words, Belle. Prayer is the best way to get through tough times. Hugs, Bill Beryl Edmonds July 18, 2022 at 5:15 PM Thank you Bill,I believe in the power of prayer too… Belle

Heidi Sands July 14, 2022 at 6:47 AM Inspiring message of faith. Well written :) Beryl Edmonds July 18, 2022 at 5:14 PM Thank you Heidi, very grateful… Belle :)

Panagiota Romios July 13, 2022 at 7:07 AM Right on, poetess! One cannot weep when one’s ego is hurt. It happens, ask God for help. Sometimes, it takes more than one call to Him. You know he's your Father and the source of all strength. Love, Panagiota xxx Beryl Edmonds July 18, 2022 at 5:13 PM Thank you Panagiota, one can depend on God our Father, He’s alway there to hear our prayers… love Belle

Linda Alice Fowler July 12, 2022 at 5:00 AM Beautiful, heartfelt write Belle. So perfectly rhymed. All best! Linda Beryl Edmonds July 18, 2022 at 5:10 PM Thank you Linda, truly appreciated… Belle

Anitha Jayasankar July 12, 2022 at 2:56 AM Sincere prayers are always heard by God... Loved this graceful sublime write dear Belle... Best wishes and hugs... ~ Ani Beryl Edmonds July 18, 2022 at 5:09 PM Thank you very much Ani, it’s true God is ever near to listen to you. All the best, hugs… Belle

Silpika Kalita July 12, 2022 at 12:59 AM Thank you so much, this is such a philosophical reflective share. Please accept my regard for this spritual inking, best wishes for the contest... Silpika Beryl Edmonds July 18, 2022 at 5:02 PM Thank you so much Silpika, though the poem came nowhere in Unseeking Seeker’s contest I enjoyed the challenge… Belle

Harry Horsman July 9, 2022 at 7:27 PM Excellent poem, love the message and the strength of faith. Beryl Edmonds July 10, 2022 at 12:15 PM Thank you very much Harry, truly appreciated… Belle

Sotto Poet July 8, 2022 at 7:24 AM Great rhyming poem Belle. Your great diction and tone are both challenging and soothing. I pray that all of your prayers are granted. Beryl Edmonds July 8, 2022 at 8:06 AM Thank you very much Sotto, may your prayers be blessed and granted too… Belle