Facing Fear

The big cat followed close behind my trail
It was dark and I had no light source
My true love lived over the swamp
Quicksand in places not known
Her house ahead was dark
I rapped and she smiled
Please marry me
I asked her
in dread
FEAR


© Jun 06 2010 for Andrea's Etheree contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/21/2010 6:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest "Etheree Me" Charles. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/21/2010 1:48:00 AM
Well I'm hoping that fear turned to joy ;) but I have a feeling that it did--congrats to you for your win, Charles! --nikko :)
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Date: 6/20/2010 7:08:00 PM
I love this! Why be scared; just do it! Congratulations on your success in the contest. Blessings, Joseph
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Date: 6/20/2010 6:44:00 PM
But I bet it didn't take long to lose that fear. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/20/2010 12:26:00 PM
I bet many can relate to your words. You have me smiling. Congratulations on being a winner in Andrea's contest. Enjoy your success. I wish you many more. Karen
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Date: 6/20/2010 3:53:00 AM
Charles I just loved the twist ending of this one, so I gave you a number 7 in my Etheree contest. Congratulations! andrea
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Date: 6/7/2010 6:53:00 AM
How orginal!! I love this imaginative write!! I hope she said yes!!!! :)
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Date: 6/7/2010 4:57:00 AM
All the best in the contest - nice expression
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