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Catie Lindsey Contest Name Lost and Found
when love is found and eyes do lock, time it passes two in shock, no never mind the poor old clock, the cobweb facination. Don Johnson
magic comes into sight, and hooked like a fish, we whimper might, cos it is so delish, no escape, we wish:) delight...
Yes John Love to the max, brain goes slack, unguided lunatic, thick as a brick, no hope 4 Jack :) or the shiela in black... 4 just a tick.
Thank you Nancy babe, guess we all have been loves slave, facinated like bird by snake, hypnotic, so you cannot break, away.

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Date: 8/22/2011 1:59:00 AM
wonderfully penned Don
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Date: 8/21/2011 9:58:00 PM
Wonderful write! Love hides the key that winds up the clocks! Love goes on!!
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Don Johnson
Date: 8/22/2011 1:06:00 AM
but love still rocks, clock still chimes, key unlocks, and out steps sweet, young Goldilocks .
Date: 8/21/2011 6:40:00 PM
very clever Don....a pleasure to read...smiles....chiquita
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Date: 8/21/2011 11:14:00 AM
Nice one, Don Johnson! (and a great big LOL, John Smith) :)
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Don Johnson
Date: 8/21/2011 6:59:00 PM
Thank you Nancy babe, guess we all have been loves slave, facinated like bird by snake, hypnotic, so you cannot break, away.
Date: 8/21/2011 9:00:00 AM
Apt clever poem. What those two need is a 'doc' to treat the mental illness called love.
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Don Johnson
Date: 8/21/2011 6:52:00 PM
Yes John Love to the max, brain goes slack,unguided lunatic, thick as a brick, no hope 4 Jack :) or the shiela in black...4 just a tick.
Date: 8/21/2011 7:52:00 AM
I like it Don. Well done. It gave me something to think about. Tony
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