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Face to Face

Face to face at last Perpetual gaze is held No words are spoken Hands reaching out with purpose You grab the last cookie first ~Smiles~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/18/2011 5:27:00 AM
Just wonderful, I loved your sweet Tanka~~
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Date: 2/17/2011 2:16:00 PM
wow killer last line I can smell the cookies!remember punctuation and capitalization not used in japanese forms [they count the sounds and they give a different sound to indicate surprise which would add to the sound count, so, they don't use punctuation]
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Date: 2/17/2011 1:39:00 AM
smiles indeed!! wasn't expecting that! haha a sort of quick draw on cookies ;) very very cute ;) enjoyed this one, Shar :)
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Date: 2/15/2011 6:14:00 PM
OH, my I LOVE THIS. HIGHEST Rating!
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Date: 2/15/2011 5:49:00 PM
Ha Ha but who?..got the crumbs! enjoyed this light hearted piece Sharon.
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Date: 2/15/2011 5:33:00 PM
Very romantic Tanka with a humorous ending----enjoyed---kashinath
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Date: 2/15/2011 4:35:00 PM
Good one..Enjoyed the surprise humorous ending..Sara
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Date: 2/15/2011 4:17:00 PM
Cute little tanka. Thanks for posting this.
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Date: 2/15/2011 4:03:00 PM
Sweet as u Shar and such a romantic Tanka too.. feeling the emotion my friend with luv..
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