Face In Space

We started that colony when we first came
   Never realizing that on earth we would do the same.

  
   We put our face on the planet as a mark in time
   Only to find that we would have to repeat it in kind.


   We found that the angry red planet could not make a suitable place
   To deposit our seed and continue our race.


   We had to move to a home with a more temperate life
   Wanting to not continue contending with the heated strife.


   We saw the blue sphere was inhabited there next in space
   Your people were more than hospitable than others in any kind of place.


   We put our face on your blue planet, too
   Knowing some day, it would be discovered by you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Fraser Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 12:30 PM
I like the touch of hidden mystery in your poem Daniel. Many congratulations on your win >> James
Brown Avatar
September 23, 2010 at 5:46 AM
Congratulations Daniel for your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Sphinx Head on Mars?". Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 9:14 PM
I am really liking the way some people concluded their poems. YOur last couplet really sums it up well! congrats on your super fine win. Andrea
Freeman Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 4:22 PM
Congratulations Daniel on your #3 presentation in a great contest. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 2:23 PM
Congratulations on this super win in the contest, Daniel
Johnson Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 2:09 PM
Great writing. Great win. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 1:26 PM
Congrats Dan on your big win in this contest... a wonderful write my friend.. enjoy with luv...
Devonshire Avatar
September 22, 2010 at 10:58 AM
Outstanding poem, Daniel. Congratulations on taking third place! Love, Carolyn
Locksley Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 5:25 PM
I believe the Egyptians did have help in building the pyramids and this type of technology could have only come from extraterrestrials, Daniel. Your last two lines are amazing and I think this poem will do great in Carolyn's contest. Take care, Diane
Devonshire Avatar
September 14, 2010 at 10:34 AM
:) Awesome! Thanks for supporting the contest, Daniel. Love, Carolyn
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace