Face In Space

We started that colony when we first came
   Never realizing that on earth we would do the same.

  
   We put our face on the planet as a mark in time
   Only to find that we would have to repeat it in kind.


   We found that the angry red planet could not make a suitable place
   To deposit our seed and continue our race.


   We had to move to a home with a more temperate life
   Wanting to not continue contending with the heated strife.


   We saw the blue sphere was inhabited there next in space
   Your people were more than hospitable than others in any kind of place.


   We put our face on your blue planet, too
   Knowing some day, it would be discovered by you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/23/2010 12:30:00 PM
I like the touch of hidden mystery in your poem Daniel. Many congratulations on your win >> James
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Date: 9/23/2010 5:46:00 AM
Congratulations Daniel for your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Sphinx Head on Mars?". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/22/2010 9:14:00 PM
I am really liking the way some people concluded their poems. YOur last couplet really sums it up well! congrats on your super fine win. Andrea
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Date: 9/22/2010 4:22:00 PM
Congratulations Daniel on your #3 presentation in a great contest. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/22/2010 2:23:00 PM
Congratulations on this super win in the contest, Daniel
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Date: 9/22/2010 2:09:00 PM
Great writing. Great win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/22/2010 1:26:00 PM
Congrats Dan on your big win in this contest... a wonderful write my friend.. enjoy with luv...
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Date: 9/22/2010 10:58:00 AM
Outstanding poem, Daniel. Congratulations on taking third place! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/20/2010 5:25:00 PM
I believe the Egyptians did have help in building the pyramids and this type of technology could have only come from extraterrestrials, Daniel. Your last two lines are amazing and I think this poem will do great in Carolyn's contest. Take care, Diane
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Date: 9/14/2010 10:34:00 AM
:) Awesome! Thanks for supporting the contest, Daniel. Love, Carolyn
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