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Fabulous Fun Footles-Fairytale

Adventures In Wonderland-Condensed Version Alice malice Rabbit's habit "I'm late can't wait" tardy lordy! deep hole took toll she fell oh well found note I quote, "Drink me" it's free too big took swig she drank then shrank ate cake mistake Hatter chatter treed cat too fat March Hare he's there Red Queen so mean beguiled poor child from shakes she wakes it seemed she dreamed amends tale ends <<<<<<<<<<<<>>>>>>>>>> March 22nd, 2017 Jan Allison's Fabulous Fun Footles

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/4/2017 10:34:00 AM

This one is awesome, Lin:) congratulations:) deserves a 10:)

Lin Lane
Date: 4/5/2017 9:33:00 AM

As thanks, No. A 10 from you is an honor.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2017 8:20:00 PM

Lin, you did an amazing job and deserved your great win. Congrats. So clever to use this fairy tale.

Lin Lane
Date: 4/3/2017 9:58:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea, and congratulations to you as well for your string of great footless.

John Michaels

Date: 4/2/2017 4:51:00 AM

A very clever piece. Well done!

Lin Lane
Date: 4/3/2017 9:58:00 AM

Thank you, John.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/1/2017 10:06:00 PM

"deep hole took toll" I love it! Wow Lin, this is one of the most brilliant footles I have ever read! Going into my Faves. I sure hope this takes top honors! Happy Easter my friend. xxxooo 7 ; )

Lin Lane
Date: 4/3/2017 9:57:00 AM

Thank you so very much for your terrific comments, Connie. Each one is truly appreciated.