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Fabulous Fun Footles-Fairytale

Adventures In Wonderland-Condensed Version Alice malice Rabbit's habit "I'm late can't wait" tardy lordy! deep hole took toll she fell oh well found note I quote, "Drink me" it's free too big took swig she drank then shrank ate cake mistake Hatter chatter treed cat too fat March Hare he's there Red Queen so mean beguiled poor child from shakes she wakes it seemed she dreamed amends tale ends <<<<<<<<<<<<>>>>>>>>>> March 22nd, 2017 Jan Allison's Fabulous Fun Footles

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Joanna Daniel
Date: 4/4/2017 10:34:00 AM
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This one is awesome, Lin:) congratulations:) deserves a 10:)
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/5/2017 9:33:00 AM
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As thanks, No. A 10 from you is an honor.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/2/2017 8:20:00 PM
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Lin, you did an amazing job and deserved your great win. Congrats. So clever to use this fairy tale.
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/3/2017 9:58:00 AM
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Thanks, Andrea, and congratulations to you as well for your string of great footless.
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John Michaels
Date: 4/2/2017 4:51:00 AM
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A very clever piece. Well done!
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/3/2017 9:58:00 AM
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Thank you, John.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/1/2017 10:06:00 PM
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"deep hole took toll" I love it! Wow Lin, this is one of the most brilliant footles I have ever read! Going into my Faves. I sure hope this takes top honors! Happy Easter my friend. xxxooo 7 ; )
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/3/2017 9:57:00 AM
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Thank you so very much for your terrific comments, Connie. Each one is truly appreciated.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/1/2017 6:16:00 AM
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Clever! Congrats!
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/1/2017 8:26:00 PM
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Thanks for the compliment, Kim.
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Alexis Y.
Date: 3/31/2017 5:37:00 PM
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Hi Lin, I agree with Jan, you told the whole story in the footle form. Congratulations on your 1st place win: -) Alexis
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/1/2017 8:25:00 PM
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Thank you, Alexis.
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Roy Pett
Date: 3/31/2017 5:35:00 PM
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Brilliant and clever write Lin, congratulations on your well deserved win, Roy. :))
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/1/2017 8:24:00 PM
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Thank you very much
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/31/2017 5:00:00 PM
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Such a brilliant fun string of poems Lin:-)You told the whole story in so few lines in a very clever way:-)Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/1/2017 8:23:00 PM
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Many thanks for creating a fun contest and for liking this one, Jan.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/29/2017 6:37:00 PM
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So much fun, loved this!
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/1/2017 8:22:00 PM
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Thanks so much, Arthur.
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Charlie Smith
Date: 3/28/2017 7:26:00 PM
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Fun stuff Lin, best wishes...
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Lin Lane
Date: 4/1/2017 8:21:00 PM
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Thanks, Charlie!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/23/2017 12:32:00 AM
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Ha ha, this is sheer brilliance l! 7 all the way.
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Lin Lane
Date: 3/23/2017 7:41:00 AM
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Merci, Richard. Thanks so much for thinking so. lol and great to see you.
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Elizabeth Kinch
Date: 3/22/2017 5:46:00 PM
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So many great footles being posted. I haven't tried one yet but this is inspiring me to have a try. Great theme Lin. Good luck in the contest.
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Lin Lane
Date: 3/22/2017 6:07:00 PM
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Thank you, Elizabeth. It's not difficult, and once you start it's difficult to stop.
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Alexis Y.
Date: 3/22/2017 3:24:00 PM
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Hi Lin, I really enjoyed this tale. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Lin Lane
Date: 3/22/2017 6:07:00 PM
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Thanks a bunch, Alexis.
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Tim Smith
Date: 3/22/2017 3:21:00 PM
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I quip...fun trip
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Lin Lane
Date: 3/22/2017 7:56:00 PM
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You're such a sweetheart. Thank you for the thought...hugs to you.
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Tim Smith
Date: 3/22/2017 6:51:00 PM
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I told Jan she could end the contest because I've just read the winner.
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Lin Lane
Date: 3/22/2017 6:06:00 PM
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real cute...a hoot ~ Thanks. Tim.

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