Fabric of Reality

life’s a tapestry i’m the thread ~ my picture’s now sewn inside your head

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Gary Radice

Date: 1/8/2022 4:07:00 AM

Your words continue to weave pictures David - with just the right amount of needle. Cheers - Gary

Gary Radice
Date: 1/8/2022 11:16:00 AM

Love your answer David. Top poet.

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/8/2022 4:41:00 AM

Heya Gary, I believe this medium of communication, brings together the threads of reality, I wanted to relay to the reader the process of a picture forming as I write, and they observe, cheers David

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/8/2022 12:21:00 AM

Life is a tapestry, it can reveal a lifetime of events and thoughts, but at some stage you will run out of thread because you will be dead and what about the picture you have sewn into another's head, will he or she live forever, no their life's thread will also be dead. You Monoku's are like puzzles, just love them Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.r

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/8/2022 1:28:00 AM

Heya Jennifer, we are only alive for as long as the last person remembers us, but our influence on the picture no matter how imperceptible cannot be erased, information is impossible to destroy even science agrees, True reality on the quantum level only decides on its course by being observed, another puzzle lol, cheers David

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/7/2022 11:32:00 AM

- A picture of both sweet and sour ... an everyday mix of reality, David - Great written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/7/2022 11:59:00 AM

Ain’t it just Anne- Lise sweet and sour, and everything in between, every thought we communicate and feel creates reality, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/7/2022 10:11:00 AM

Like how you compare life to a tapestry David, hope you've got many miles of Thread left. Enjoy your weekend. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/7/2022 10:18:00 AM

Thank you so much Tom, paradoxically from our own perspectives if you go I go, and vice versa, how long is a piece of thread anyway lol, cheers David

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed

Date: 1/7/2022 9:58:00 AM

Excellent! Thanks - Marshall.

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/7/2022 10:01:00 AM

Thank you so much Marshall, cheers David