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Fabric Gauze

Lashes of pang whip me Bleeding like torn firefly- Harsh the spoils from untold regrets And wound's dressing can't soothe, The mesh of threadbare gauze Fragile as my wing --in bondage. 8 Nov 2017 Knit A Fabric Contest hosted by Nette Onclaud

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Date: 11/15/2017 3:04:00 PM
Great imagery in this one. A most interesting choice of fabric too. Congrats.
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Date: 11/15/2017 2:46:00 AM
A beautiful message in this second place winner Norma! Congratulations! : )
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Date: 11/14/2017 6:49:00 AM
Norma, what kind of fabric can we use to cover the pain in our soul? Gauze seems appropriate, nice write.
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Date: 11/13/2017 12:37:00 PM
Excellent write,Norma , congratulations on your win Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 11/13/2017 9:49:00 AM
very uniquely done: i like the way you described gauze as a symbol of pain, norma... kudos and thanks for participating..
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