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Fable's Dreamland

And dusk invites 
more bouncing glee,
as ribbons knot 
Queen Fey’s gold  stick
like wiggles coil
on toes, how free
to laugh around 
while clouds frolic.
when kiddies shout,
"let's pirouette",
while hours sway 
in minuet!


Fable Contest 
Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2014

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Alexis Y. Date: 3/11/2017 10:56:00 PM Hi Nette, I really enjoyed this fable. Great imagery as well. Congratulations on your fine win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 3/11/2017 9:09:00 PM Wonderful fable, Nette, congratulations on your win ~* Hugs Eve Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/18/2014 2:53:00 PM Nette,, Congratulations, on your awesome Fable ..... Always~ Linda Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 7/17/2014 6:52:00 PM Very pretty. congratulations on our win. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri Date: 7/16/2014 10:06:00 AM Congrats on yor fantastic top wining poem! Fairyland fun in jolly rhyme! Warm wishes nette. Login to Reply

Roy Jerden Date: 7/16/2014 8:52:00 AM Very nice tale, Nette! Congratulations! Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 7/16/2014 1:22:00 AM Beautiful write Nette,, congrats on top place win! Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 7/15/2014 7:36:00 PM Simply enchanting - a worthy winner:-) Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Carol Eastman Date: 7/15/2014 12:09:00 PM This was a beautifully developed write! Beautifully written piece. Login to Reply

Kelly Deschler Date: 3/10/2014 6:29:00 PM This was a wonderful, whimsical poem, Nette. I enjoyed this so much. An enchanting write! Good luck in the contest!...Thank you so much for the great comments! :) Login to Reply

Donna Jones Date: 3/9/2014 11:12:00 PM Who doesn't love to blow those bubbles....and this is a magical sumer fun poem nett..sure to be on top. Login to Reply

Monterey Sirak Date: 3/9/2014 6:06:00 AM So playful and fun. A joy to read. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/9/2014 6:06:00 AM Great flow in this one..If for a contest, reads like winning material..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 3/7/2014 11:02:00 PM You certainly brought the child out from within me! Each line lit me up with a smile of tenderness and joy of being a child! You are a genius of a poet my friend! Was this a challenge for you, because it seemed to flow so easily throughout your poem! What a harmonious piece, Great Work! Login to Reply

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 3/7/2014 8:15:00 PM This is very beautiful Nette. Sometimes I wish I lived in a fairy land. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla Login to Reply

Tiaua M Ioane Date: 3/7/2014 5:35:00 PM Very artistic, beautiful setting for an escape from our troubled world - your dreamland! Tiaua. Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 3/7/2014 2:54:00 PM love this truly magical piece, Nette Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 3/7/2014 2:06:00 PM An exciting delve into the garden of dreams where the imagination frolics unconstrained... Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/7/2014 1:41:00 PM - If I become 99 years ..... I will always have a bit of "child" in my soul ..... dreams, joy and a little adventure .... Nice to read your lovely poem, Nette. - ALWAYS!! - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 3/7/2014 1:24:00 PM Enchantment ...A world escape to magic..Yes these are such feelings you transmitted in this poem.Happy Friday sweet Nette...Make the best of it..Hugs Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 3/7/2014 1:07:00 PM This could not be more delightful.....and makes one want to be childlike again. A frolic through each stanza.... Love it !! Login to Reply