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Eyes Wide Open

Some say that he was born to lead Others, that he was much too weak Yet, they followed, blind as bats Eyes wide open, kissing ass Until he led them into the deep!

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Jack Horne

Date: 6/29/2013 3:12:00 PM

lol, glad to see this was a winner

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/1/2010 9:29:00 PM

good one, Audrey. Congrats on your win. LUv, Andrea

James Fraser

Date: 7/1/2010 12:07:00 PM

Terrific Limerick Audrey, a deserved win in Carolyn's fine contest >> James

Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/30/2010 10:39:00 PM

Great work. congratulations. Love, Joyce

John Freeman

Date: 6/30/2010 8:16:00 PM

Congratulations, Audrey on your 6th place, Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/30/2010 7:41:00 PM

Congrats on the win

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 6/30/2010 1:42:00 PM

wow that can be said of SO many leaders! congrad's! Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/30/2010 9:20:00 AM

Congratulations Audrey on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Follower or Leader". What a hoot. Love, Carol

Mitch White

Date: 6/30/2010 8:59:00 AM

Great tell Audrey- Congrats to you

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/30/2010 8:21:00 AM

We are all blindly being led "into the deep!" Enjoyed your poem, Dimples. There were many awesome entries. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 6/29/2010 6:25:00 PM

This is jagged funny, but you have to laugh, so, you've done the job, right? ! One virtue of this is that you simply have to read it again. thanks as always , Audrey, and I hope the big day is closer for you and Jimmy. Thank you, truly, Gerard