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Eyes Weeping

eyes weeping laughter ringing in ears the last goodbye

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Seosamh De Burca

Date: 6/2/2016 3:12:00 PM

Nicely penned. congrats on being featured also.

James Fraser

Date: 12/14/2011 2:39:00 PM

Short yet powerful, as it leaves the reader in thought. Nice one Carol :)

Don Johnson

Date: 12/6/2011 3:48:00 PM

and then... village lout is sometime creeping, turn on him and chase him out...

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/26/2011 7:46:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your verse today Carol. That's a wild picture (of you?)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/18/2011 11:34:00 PM

It would be interesting to know the meaning of this one . For or about whom it was written! I enjoyed seeing this, CArol.

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 11/17/2011 7:23:00 AM

i hope this is not you saying good-bye to all of us! i like how your poem could mean tears of joy and tears of sadness at the same time, because i think a lot of good-byes are both. and thank you for your kind comments on my work :)

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/16/2011 3:47:00 PM

now this is just good literature because like it or not, it jives with reality. nice one Carol. Into my favs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/16/2011 12:54:00 PM

Very emotive work..Sad...The end is so final..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/12/2011 10:19:00 PM

Hi! my strong friend, never say last good bye. Your heart is filled with holy love and mind with best senses, no laughter can ring in your ears. Who will do, he will repent and will come to you again. Truth always prevails, my friend. Lovely written, bl

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/10/2011 2:13:00 PM

first 2 lines are aces! now you need a showing of that thought ex: the train pulls out/ a wave from the window..hugs! light & love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/10/2011 9:42:00 AM

well I hope this is not the last goodbye from a dear friend Carol.. hurt takes time to heal and u are on a higher level of knowledge so u will attain that healing needed to go on ..move on.. I am sad that u feel so hurt .. I have had my share here too.. weeping endures for a night ..but.. joy comes in the morning luv.. stay focused on the creative gift God has blessed u with and u will rise above all the hurts ..emjoy your break and the holidays too..luv..

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/9/2011 9:36:00 PM

Well the only positive thing about this situation would be that from that moment on you can improve and start to heal! Yes, it is hard, but time heals, so does crying! So this a good thing...much better than lingering here! This poem bring those feeling to life and certainly lets us know that you have been there and done that!! Thank you for sharing! Timeless work!!

Jack Horne

Date: 11/9/2011 12:23:00 PM

Yes, always a hard time. Lovely write, Carol

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/9/2011 12:03:00 PM

That happens naturally. With strength of sequence penned. So true, enjoyed, my friend. bl

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/9/2011 11:45:00 AM

Long-term relationships that end in breakups always draw tears, Carol. Saying "the last goodbye" is so hard. Very touching senryu, dear. Thanks for all your kind words. Love, Carolyn