Eyes Turn To Heaven

believer seeks eternity ~ sceptic reckons why’s it always me By David Kavanagh

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Christopher Flaherty

Date: 12/3/2021 10:37:00 AM

Correct and true David

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/3/2021 1:03:00 PM

Human nature Christopher

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/29/2021 1:35:00 AM

Awesome monoku, David, so true:)

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/29/2021 1:53:00 AM

Thank you Jo, you totally get the oxymoron embedded cheers David

Eve Roper

Date: 11/28/2021 6:56:00 AM

Their dreams are always to be in peace and in wealth, but that is not life. Great monoku. Thank you for commenting on my poem, Waterfall.

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/28/2021 8:31:00 AM

Certainly not Eve, reality runs much deeper than looking up to the heavens, cheers David

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/27/2021 6:49:00 PM

When life is filled with harsh truths, we may assert that being a person of faith rather than a doubter is better. Well done, David, and I hope everything goes well for you.

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/28/2021 12:51:00 AM

I agree peoples faith can help them in times of hardship, but even the doubter will turn their eyes to heaven and say why me, probably to justify the doubt the have, thank you for your kind words, I’m doing fine Lasaad, just exploring the human condition, cheers David

Voodoo Child

Date: 11/27/2021 3:41:00 AM

Better to be a believer than a sceptic I guess. Nice job.

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/27/2021 4:56:00 AM

Heya voodoo, Pragmatic and open minded, probably describes where I am in this one, cheers David

Jan Allison

Date: 11/26/2021 3:50:00 PM

good one liner David:-) hugs Jan xx

David Kavanagh
Date: 11/27/2021 2:09:00 AM

Heya Jan, A wordplay perhaps, with also a few juxtaposed truths embedded in there, cheers David