Eyes of May

Eyes of May In her eyes, I saw love eternal a mesmeric maternal with a seismic smile For in her tears I saw life’s pain as she would restrain her turbulent trial In her eyes, I saw a selfless soul as she kept control in her daily mazy mile For within her silent stare a pensive prayer the solitudes of her immobile ~~~ In her eyes, I saw the light of God as I stood and awed at her internal being Amidst her inner thoughts, a mind tied in knots of a heart fluttering fleeing In her eyes, I saw myself a distant dust on a shelf before her final sleeping For in her eyes of May that soon faded away until our next mystic meeting. In Memory of my Mother~Emma...May.16.1941~Oct.24.2017 ~~~ Happy! Mothers! Day!, wherever you are...and to all PoetrySoup Moms... 'Eyes Of May'...by Sinamore May.11.2018 Eyes Sponsored by: Anthony Slausen Repost...May.02.2019 Memories of May Sponsored by: Michelle Faulkner

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Date: 5/14/2018 7:08:00 AM
This is a very touching and wonderful tribute to your mother, WW, from one brother to another, from diff mother's (lol) glad you clarified that! Great pen my friend...All the best...Charlie
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Date: 5/13/2018 2:29:00 PM
- A beautiful writing ... written with love <3 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/12/2018 9:41:00 PM
Your mother is probably in heaven crying tears of pride and joy, thanks for sharing this WW. It's a deeply touching poem, so appropriate for Mother's Day
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Date: 5/12/2018 6:49:00 PM
what a lovely tribute ^WW^:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/12/2018 1:44:00 PM
"You take us away, with your poem Eyes of May"! "Our everything drowning into your Beauty"! A wonderful and an outshing Tribute to your precious mum and to every mother! An amazing imagery, a flowing pen and a talented poet portraying a sweet and serene recognition to his Queen of heart. Stay bright and blessed Winged Warrior.
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Date: 5/12/2018 1:18:00 PM
Mystic tribute to your departed mother that is proudly observing your every move my friend, WW. Certainly a worthy mother's Day poem! Loved it!
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Date: 5/12/2018 12:36:00 PM
This sweet, loving dedication to your mom brought tears to my eyes especially since I too lost my mom last year. I am sure she is by your side every day surrounding you, her precious child, with her love! Blessings, hugs, and love. Pandita
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Date: 5/12/2018 9:29:00 AM
What a beautiful tribute to your mom. I’m sure she is smiling from heaven.
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Date: 5/12/2018 8:30:00 AM
What a beautiful tribute WW to all Mothers here and departed. Loved it and a Fave. Good luck in the contest....Maria hugs
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Date: 5/12/2018 6:58:00 AM
Beautiful tribute WW ..a treasure full of memories. Well written, as always ..best for a win WW.
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Date: 5/12/2018 2:37:00 AM
Beautiful and what a tribute. My Mom has also passed on and I appreciate her more than ever...
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Date: 5/11/2018 7:47:00 PM
You have done what I couldn't do, write a poem about or to your mother for mother's day. Very moving, Wingman and God bless.
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Date: 5/11/2018 3:59:00 PM
radiant in its delivery..ohh, i can't help but cherish this poem, WW... happy mother's day!..huggs
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Date: 5/11/2018 2:06:00 PM
Oh, this is so nice WW. Beautiful. Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 5/11/2018 12:42:00 PM
Hello Winged. This entry is a wonderful poetic and elegant tribute. I like titles and you have named this entry appropriately. The execution is poetry in true form including tone and voice. I'm sorry John your mother is no longer with you. Best of luck with the contest. This entry can stand on its own.
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Date: 5/11/2018 12:32:00 PM
Great remembrance for a first mother's day without her. God bless you. She inspired a great pen from your hand.
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